Glowing Moon
A man gets fixated on the moon40 total reviews
Comment from Samantha Wymer
Wow! Amazing! I love your poem. Looking up at the moonlight is so peaceful to look at. This poem really brings me some inner peace. All your words are written wonderfully and I hope to become as good as you are in the future. Thanks for inspiring me. Excellent Job!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Wow! Amazing! I love your poem. Looking up at the moonlight is so peaceful to look at. This poem really brings me some inner peace. All your words are written wonderfully and I hope to become as good as you are in the future. Thanks for inspiring me. Excellent Job!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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You will. Many poets are better than I am
Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from nomi338
Wherever you go, the sun, the moon & the stars go with you. As do your thoughts, your dreams and some of your memories. There are some things that you cannot escape, nor should you want to.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Wherever you go, the sun, the moon & the stars go with you. As do your thoughts, your dreams and some of your memories. There are some things that you cannot escape, nor should you want to.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from EeanBlack
Yes! Being alone is so uplifting. He sees yellow remnants of sun get deceased. That line makes the entire poem. I love that art. I love this poem. The image reminds me of some places I went in the navy.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Yes! Being alone is so uplifting. He sees yellow remnants of sun get deceased. That line makes the entire poem. I love that art. I love this poem. The image reminds me of some places I went in the navy.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
And thank you, especially for the shiny stars. It made my day.
Comment from patcelaw
Your poem is very beautifully written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is beautiful. I wished you a very good weekend and I also wish you the very best of blessings that come from the Lord. Patricia
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Your poem is very beautifully written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is beautiful. I wished you a very good weekend and I also wish you the very best of blessings that come from the Lord. Patricia
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Barry Penfold
What a lovely poem. The image sits perfectly at the top and your words flow so well. Yes, it is uplifting and a total pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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What a lovely poem. The image sits perfectly at the top and your words flow so well. Yes, it is uplifting and a total pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is quite wonderful. The picture fits together marvelously. I enjoyed the flow. Tomorrow starts my weekend of moving. Wish me luck and not too many bad memories. Karen
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This is quite wonderful. The picture fits together marvelously. I enjoyed the flow. Tomorrow starts my weekend of moving. Wish me luck and not too many bad memories. Karen
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from BOO ghost
Beautiful moon image! The moon rays reflection is tranquil. A picture paints a thousand words. Reading...nice rhymes in these stanzas. He stares at the moon for a very long time;
Begins to go home with the moon on his mind.
It soon will be morning; and he walks alone.
Soft glow from the moonlight has followed him home. My favorite quatrain. The moon influences the tides. We never see the dark side of the moon because the moon has no gravity field of magnetic field, it never turns. Who was this mysterious man who starred at the moon? Nice poem!
BOO!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Beautiful moon image! The moon rays reflection is tranquil. A picture paints a thousand words. Reading...nice rhymes in these stanzas. He stares at the moon for a very long time;
Begins to go home with the moon on his mind.
It soon will be morning; and he walks alone.
Soft glow from the moonlight has followed him home. My favorite quatrain. The moon influences the tides. We never see the dark side of the moon because the moon has no gravity field of magnetic field, it never turns. Who was this mysterious man who starred at the moon? Nice poem!
BOO!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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BOO that man was nobody in particular
Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from gansach
Being a big fan of the moon, I liked your poem very much. It has a nice presentation with a beautiful picture. And the thought that the moon soothes and calms is very nice. Good imagery, well done!
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Being a big fan of the moon, I liked your poem very much. It has a nice presentation with a beautiful picture. And the thought that the moon soothes and calms is very nice. Good imagery, well done!
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from royowen
One can always tell a poet, very reflectively declaring their thoughts, and venturing into different field, my wife calls me a moody, broody Welshman, although my grandfather was welsh and spoke the language, this is beautifully written 11 syllable lines. But you've not lost none the great flow you generate, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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One can always tell a poet, very reflectively declaring their thoughts, and venturing into different field, my wife calls me a moody, broody Welshman, although my grandfather was welsh and spoke the language, this is beautifully written 11 syllable lines. But you've not lost none the great flow you generate, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
And especially for those shiny stars (a term I plagiarized from you)
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Well earned
Comment from lancellot
This is very nice. I like the rhymes and two the near rhyme endings are good. I would recommend taking a look at the first line of the second stanza. It seems to spill over. It is a little thing though.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This is very nice. I like the rhymes and two the near rhyme endings are good. I would recommend taking a look at the first line of the second stanza. It seems to spill over. It is a little thing though.
Well done.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and a great review
