Willing Hearts
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Comment from estory
You had a nice little scene in there where Sami plays around in the attic and gets Noah and his crew jumping at the crash up there. I thought the dialogue was lively, there was a bit of suspense, Sami continues to be a handful. They all continue to be pretty jumpy at her unscripted and unpredictable antics. estory
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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You had a nice little scene in there where Sami plays around in the attic and gets Noah and his crew jumping at the crash up there. I thought the dialogue was lively, there was a bit of suspense, Sami continues to be a handful. They all continue to be pretty jumpy at her unscripted and unpredictable antics. estory
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Yes, Sami is a handful. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yes, they must find something for Sami to do, I'd go mad just sitting around all day or cooking the meals. At least they have sorted out how to continue without Sami getting all upset. She has to realise he has a job to do, and that includes keeping her safe. Another great chapter, Barbara. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Yes, they must find something for Sami to do, I'd go mad just sitting around all day or cooking the meals. At least they have sorted out how to continue without Sami getting all upset. She has to realise he has a job to do, and that includes keeping her safe. Another great chapter, Barbara. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Yes, Sami is bored. She's used to being very active. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story continues with suspense that kept me engaged. The development of Noah and Sami's relationship is evolving nicely. Sami's exploration of the attic adds a charming touch. I thought this had a a good pace. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Your story continues with suspense that kept me engaged. The development of Noah and Sami's relationship is evolving nicely. Sami's exploration of the attic adds a charming touch. I thought this had a a good pace. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is such a wonderful story. I'm going to follow you after I write this review. You can tell how hard you worked on this. Congratulations on your achievement! Happy writing!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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This is such a wonderful story. I'm going to follow you after I write this review. You can tell how hard you worked on this. Congratulations on your achievement! Happy writing!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from nomi338
As my understanding of relationships go, this one is developing into a sound one with the at first steps shaky, now on what seems to be a solid foundation. My wife and I have been together for over fifty years. It has not always been 100, but we have never had a major fight, or a major disagreement where we were not able to quickly work it out and advance forward. I see some very encouraging facets in the growing relationship between Noah and Sami. Great work.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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As my understanding of relationships go, this one is developing into a sound one with the at first steps shaky, now on what seems to be a solid foundation. My wife and I have been together for over fifty years. It has not always been 100, but we have never had a major fight, or a major disagreement where we were not able to quickly work it out and advance forward. I see some very encouraging facets in the growing relationship between Noah and Sami. Great work.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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When God is the center of a marriage. Things will work out for the better. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
We're getting there! These two different yet stubborn two will maneuver their way through the complicated world they are in and I know in the end all will be good. Gret job!
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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We're getting there! These two different yet stubborn two will maneuver their way through the complicated world they are in and I know in the end all will be good. Gret job!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I sure hope so. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
