Sunshine Or Rain
Sunshine or rain, blessing or curse.34 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the artwork, nomi.
-A good presentation, and your notes are appreciated.
-Very good introduction about sunshine and rain.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good opening lines in the poem show how the balance
is a delicate one between sunshine and rain.
-I agree that both are needed.
-A very good concluding line.
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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-I love the artwork, nomi.
-A good presentation, and your notes are appreciated.
-Very good introduction about sunshine and rain.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good opening lines in the poem show how the balance
is a delicate one between sunshine and rain.
-I agree that both are needed.
-A very good concluding line.
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from BethShelby
This is true. God knows the earth nust have both. It would God could if he chose make sure every one got the perfect amount all of the time but he sometime allows us to figure out how to work around things that aren't perfect.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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This is true. God knows the earth nust have both. It would God could if he chose make sure every one got the perfect amount all of the time but he sometime allows us to figure out how to work around things that aren't perfect.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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You are absolutely correct. Also, those who have gone without these necessary elements develop a greater appreciation of them when they return.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
i really enjoyed this poem and especially the format you used with the rhymes showing up within each line. the artwork you found is perfect and really adds to your presentation.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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i really enjoyed this poem and especially the format you used with the rhymes showing up within each line. the artwork you found is perfect and really adds to your presentation.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.
Comment from Sally Law
Yes, I agree, a lovely poem of the delicate balance of the sunshine and the rain. Beautiful offering, my friend, in this unique poetry form.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :))
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Yes, I agree, a lovely poem of the delicate balance of the sunshine and the rain. Beautiful offering, my friend, in this unique poetry form.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :))
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you sally, your law says that all must obey the wisdom you display with your wonderful comments.
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:)) xo
