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Cry of a Refugee

The greatest movement of people in history is upon us.

32 total reviews 
Comment from Aussie
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You have written a snapshot of the terrible war in Gaza through the eyes of a child. Some say "where is God in their deaths and misery?" The huge refugee problem is something we can only watch on TV. Innocent women and children starving, men can't fight back. Pray for them in the midst of misery. K xx

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
    Wow,
    Thanks for the six stars and so glad you enjoyed the read. A sad topic but, I just felt the need to vent about the developing disaster. thanks for your support.
    Regards
    Barry Penfold.
Comment from Sheryl Rhian Dyer
Excellent
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Beautiful poem, and very deep. The poem is raw and brings about emotion to the reader, as they visualise how they would feel if this was their life. It captures very pressing matters in the current world we live in. I am very grateful to have read this poem.

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 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
    Sheryl,
    Thanks for your review. It is greatly appreciated. Yes, it is indeed a sad state of affairs. I am not sure of the solution.
    Regards
    Barry Penfold.