Pirate Ships
A father and daughter pretend cars are pirate ships36 total reviews
Comment from Erika Whittle
This is so sad. It reminds me of a girl who lived across the street. Nobody new the truth until after he was dead. It was a crazy time for that family, filled with mixed emotions. I think you did a great job with this sensitive topic.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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This is so sad. It reminds me of a girl who lived across the street. Nobody new the truth until after he was dead. It was a crazy time for that family, filled with mixed emotions. I think you did a great job with this sensitive topic.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Erika for your wonderful comments and a nice review
Comment from QC Poet
I was Hope I ran into a happier Pirate story where treasure was found instead I feel bad about the ruse this dad used to hurt her. Nicely written yet sad also Thank you for writing this
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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I was Hope I ran into a happier Pirate story where treasure was found instead I feel bad about the ruse this dad used to hurt her. Nicely written yet sad also Thank you for writing this
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Hi QC. Thank you for your wonderful comments and super review
Comment from Esther Brown
It is hard to see abused children. Or people. You captured the mixed emotions of the child well. Thanks for sharing such a sensitive subject so thoughtfully. Esther
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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It is hard to see abused children. Or people. You captured the mixed emotions of the child well. Thanks for sharing such a sensitive subject so thoughtfully. Esther
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Esther for your wonderful comments and review
Comment from ChibiElf
Whoa, that was dark.
I don't get why you used the pirate ships in the title and description. I must be missing something, but it seems like the least important part of your piece. It does hearken back to the innocence in their relationship... Hum, maybe that's it? A parallel between relationship and ship, pirates are villains...
Okay. You got me thinking. For that I'll give you six.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Whoa, that was dark.
I don't get why you used the pirate ships in the title and description. I must be missing something, but it seems like the least important part of your piece. It does hearken back to the innocence in their relationship... Hum, maybe that's it? A parallel between relationship and ship, pirates are villains...
Okay. You got me thinking. For that I'll give you six.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Hi ChibiElf. in the fourth stanza, it talks about, her more innocent days, she and her father would pretend cars were pirate ships.
Thank you for your wonderful comments and review and especially for the sixth star
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
The girl did nothing wrong. She will no longer be abused, so the Universe fixed everything. Excellent writing. As a teacher I had helped several young gutls, just by being observant and speaking out. This is thought provoking.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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The girl did nothing wrong. She will no longer be abused, so the Universe fixed everything. Excellent writing. As a teacher I had helped several young gutls, just by being observant and speaking out. This is thought provoking.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Hi, Alex. I?m glad at least some young girls will have you around to help them
Thank you for your lovely review Especially for the sixth star
Comment from Dr. Nad
Molest station is a horrendous experience for children to go through because it sets in motion an unending lifetime of guilt and shame in a high percentage of those who are subjected to this atrocity. The children are so depending on their caregiving adults that it is most often someone who is supposed to be their protector who is actually their molester. Thanks for writing and sharing the story.
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Molest station is a horrendous experience for children to go through because it sets in motion an unending lifetime of guilt and shame in a high percentage of those who are subjected to this atrocity. The children are so depending on their caregiving adults that it is most often someone who is supposed to be their protector who is actually their molester. Thanks for writing and sharing the story.
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Hi, Dr. Nad. I agree that it is a horrendous crime. Thank you for your wonderful comments and review
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You are welcome Pam. Keep on keeping on!
