Her Lovely Mess
About a friend who is an organized keeper35 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I have been on a mission declutter my lifelong collections. I guess it really is a mess no matter how neatly it's still a mess. This was a very cute poem that was full of hard truths. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I have been on a mission declutter my lifelong collections. I guess it really is a mess no matter how neatly it's still a mess. This was a very cute poem that was full of hard truths. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Hi Gretchen and thank you for this lovely review. You always have a soft touch to your kind words and I appreciate you so much. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from nomi338
For some it is a mess, for some others it is just memories. Perhaps even precious memories. My wife is a big fan of the TV show Hoarders, I can bare stand to watch it, and have never watched a complete episode. My mother was a professional housekeeper at a major hotel. Making and not cleaning up a mess would have spelled a near death sentence for me.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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For some it is a mess, for some others it is just memories. Perhaps even precious memories. My wife is a big fan of the TV show Hoarders, I can bare stand to watch it, and have never watched a complete episode. My mother was a professional housekeeper at a major hotel. Making and not cleaning up a mess would have spelled a near death sentence for me.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Hi Nomi and thank you for this lovely review. You always have a soft touch to your kind words and I appreciate you so much. Thanks again, my dear BBBB
Love, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed this poem because I understand this poem. I tried to keep everything I ever owned and every receipt for purchases. I just recently shredded copies of my 2006 income tax returns.
Your poem beautifully and rhythmically describes the characteristics of a person who loves things they own. I like the term you used..."keeper." Also, I love the artwork. It pairs perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed this poem because I understand this poem. I tried to keep everything I ever owned and every receipt for purchases. I just recently shredded copies of my 2006 income tax returns.
Your poem beautifully and rhythmically describes the characteristics of a person who loves things they own. I like the term you used..."keeper." Also, I love the artwork. It pairs perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thanks Lorraine for this lovely review. You always have a soft touch to your kind words and I appreciate you so much. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from EeanBlack
He says you reap what you sow, so they'll clean it themselves when you go. That's not true, my son is a slob. He just eats, works out and goes to his job. Bad, bad poem. Yours is good though.
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reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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He says you reap what you sow, so they'll clean it themselves when you go. That's not true, my son is a slob. He just eats, works out and goes to his job. Bad, bad poem. Yours is good though.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Eean, I thank you for the kind words you said about Mel and her poem. So appreciated, my friend. Love, Debi
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I was very amused.
Comment from nancyjam
Yes, I hear you. It's heard to get rid of and more fun to add to.
Sometimes things we hold onto things for the memories they bring us.
Your poem is fun to read . The rhymes are clever.
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Yes, I hear you. It's heard to get rid of and more fun to add to.
Sometimes things we hold onto things for the memories they bring us.
Your poem is fun to read . The rhymes are clever.
Good luck in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Nancy, thanks so much for the kind words for this poem.
They are very much appreciated.
Love,Debi