You are the One
A Morning Sonnet32 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What a glorious love poem this is, with a solid, subtle undercurrent of rhythm and rhymes that aren't the least bit forced. One teeny spag: Line 3: to say YOU'RE mine.
Best of luck in the sonnet contest! xo
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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What a glorious love poem this is, with a solid, subtle undercurrent of rhythm and rhymes that aren't the least bit forced. One teeny spag: Line 3: to say YOU'RE mine.
Best of luck in the sonnet contest! xo
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you Rachelle for this lovely review and for catching my error. I greatly appreciate your good feedback.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from GWHARGIS
Wow! This was incredibly beautiful. The depth of the love expressed was as if the narrator or writer could not face another day without his lover. They are his sunrise and sunset. They are every moment in between. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Wow! This was incredibly beautiful. The depth of the love expressed was as if the narrator or writer could not face another day without his lover. They are his sunrise and sunset. They are every moment in between. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you Gretchen for this beautiful review and the extra special stars. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet