Sories Poetically Speaking
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Irish Stew"A complete story in written as a poem.
39 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very well done! Great story.
This is a really nice poem as far as this non-poet is concerned. The rhyming seems un-contrived and natural. Good work, if not good cooking!
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Very well done! Great story.
This is a really nice poem as far as this non-poet is concerned. The rhyming seems un-contrived and natural. Good work, if not good cooking!
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Wayne. I really appreciat the review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from patcelaw
This is absolutely hilarious and I really really did enjoy it. I wish you a very best. Your story is just so funny. I still laughing. Have a good weekend. God bless you. Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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This is absolutely hilarious and I really really did enjoy it. I wish you a very best. Your story is just so funny. I still laughing. Have a good weekend. God bless you. Patricia
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you Patricia. I'm so glad you got a laugh out of this and I really pleased with the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Karen Cherry
You got my last star! This is magnificent! I never saw it coming. I thought your story was delightful, and the letter would say you should have added milk instead of water or some such. But this ? I have heard of internalizing your feelings, but this takes the cake! :-)
Karen
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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You got my last star! This is magnificent! I never saw it coming. I thought your story was delightful, and the letter would say you should have added milk instead of water or some such. But this ? I have heard of internalizing your feelings, but this takes the cake! :-)
Karen
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Oh, thank you Karen. I'm glad you liked this. I love your comments and I really appreciat the six stars.
Beth
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You earned it. :-)
Comment from NanaGaye
You have written a extremely funny story. The rhyming is perfect as is the picture you chose. Poor Nellie, hope she has learned her lesson as you said in the last part of your poem one must check what they are putting into their recipes. All the best NanaGaye
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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You have written a extremely funny story. The rhyming is perfect as is the picture you chose. Poor Nellie, hope she has learned her lesson as you said in the last part of your poem one must check what they are putting into their recipes. All the best NanaGaye
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for the great review and for the six stars. I enjoyed reading your comments.
Beth
Comment from Gunner Lil
I can not believe I got to read a great poem and a hearty laugh also.
This poem was an easy read that has excellent flow and pace. The rhyming is outstanding also.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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I can not believe I got to read a great poem and a hearty laugh also.
This poem was an easy read that has excellent flow and pace. The rhyming is outstanding also.
Thank you!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for the review and cvomments. I'm glad you got a laugh. I enjoyed your comments.
Beth
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A very funny story, Beth about this young Irish girl who couldn't cook. I liked this somewhaa dark humour, and you've told this story well. Just imagining the Ash Stew now, LOL
Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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A very funny story, Beth about this young Irish girl who couldn't cook. I liked this somewhaa dark humour, and you've told this story well. Just imagining the Ash Stew now, LOL
Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Valda. This was fun to write. I'm glad you liked it. I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Barry Penfold
A really good entry for this contest. There appear to be quite a few of them. Love the concept and the humor that flows. I did have a laugh. Please take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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A really good entry for this contest. There appear to be quite a few of them. Love the concept and the humor that flows. I did have a laugh. Please take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thank you Barry, I glad you enjoyed by gross little poem story.
Beth
Comment from jim vecchio
Had I read this first, I might never have consumed my liver and onions tonight. A very lighthearted, humorous story in a poem, well done! Your story flowed smoothly and hope you cooked up an award for yourself!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Had I read this first, I might never have consumed my liver and onions tonight. A very lighthearted, humorous story in a poem, well done! Your story flowed smoothly and hope you cooked up an award for yourself!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Well I glad you supper when down with no interference form me. That you for an excellent review.
Beth
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I did have liver and onions, but the rest was only joking. I always love your works!
Comment from Julie Helms
Ewwww!! What an awesomely gross story! Poor Rose and Paddy. Very creative, and I didn't see it coming.
A possible typo:
My food taste just awful (tastes)
Great job! Thanks for sharing. Julie.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Ewwww!! What an awesomely gross story! Poor Rose and Paddy. Very creative, and I didn't see it coming.
A possible typo:
My food taste just awful (tastes)
Great job! Thanks for sharing. Julie.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thank you Julie. I really appreciate the review. I thought that word probably needed ans s and someone with tell. Thank you for being the one.
Beth
