Spiritual Moments
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "He Came to Me"Selection of spiritual poems
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Comment from lyenochka
Amen! He will never leave us nor forsake us! Thank you for your lovely testimony in Minute poetry form, Sandra! The Lord meets us where we need Him because He understands us perfectly.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Amen! He will never leave us nor forsake us! Thank you for your lovely testimony in Minute poetry form, Sandra! The Lord meets us where we need Him because He understands us perfectly.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you so very much, Helen. The minute poem was perfect for saying how I feel. He was there with me throughout my illness, and losing my dear brother. He held me together. Thank you, dear friend. Love you lots. Sandra xxx
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Comment from alexisleech
I'm not sure what a minute poem is, but this must be an excellent example because I really enjoyed reading it. It started sad, built up to acceptance and hope, and finished with the beautiful realisation that God will never leave us.
Well done, and good luck in the competition.
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I'm not sure what a minute poem is, but this must be an excellent example because I really enjoyed reading it. It started sad, built up to acceptance and hope, and finished with the beautiful realisation that God will never leave us.
Well done, and good luck in the competition.
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I will explain it when we have a chat on Skype. I got it seriously wrong the first time I tried to write one. Thank you, my dear friend, for this lovely review. And thank you for the golden star and good luck wishes! Love you lots, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from judiverse
What a beautiful minute poem, and best of luck with the moving entry. Lovely picture to accompany it. The rhyme and flow are so smooth. Each stanza presents a different stage in the narrator's life. The first indicates despair; the second, the realization that Christ can feel the pain; and finally, the comfort that knowledge brings. Positive and comforting thought in the poem. Lovely work, as usual. judi
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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What a beautiful minute poem, and best of luck with the moving entry. Lovely picture to accompany it. The rhyme and flow are so smooth. Each stanza presents a different stage in the narrator's life. The first indicates despair; the second, the realization that Christ can feel the pain; and finally, the comfort that knowledge brings. Positive and comforting thought in the poem. Lovely work, as usual. judi
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, dear Judi. I have good reason to write this one. I was so down when my youngest brother died, then I became so ill I had to spend a few weeks in hospital, (all my brothers fault!!) I didn't know how to cope with all the stress. Of course, the answer was plain and simple, as my poem has said. We can rely on Him to help. Thank you, my dear friend, for the lovely review. Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
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You're welcome. Readers can tell it's definitely from the heart. I hope you are doing better now. It takes time, as I know. You are relying on God to see you through. judi
Comment from judiverse
What a beautiful minute poem, and best of luck with the moving entry. Lovely picture to accompany it. The rhyme and flow are so smooth. Each stanza presents a different stage in the narrator's life. The first indicates despair; the second, the realization that Christ can feel the pain; and finally, the comfort that knowledge brings. Positive and comforting thought in the poem. Lovely work, as usual. judi
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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What a beautiful minute poem, and best of luck with the moving entry. Lovely picture to accompany it. The rhyme and flow are so smooth. Each stanza presents a different stage in the narrator's life. The first indicates despair; the second, the realization that Christ can feel the pain; and finally, the comfort that knowledge brings. Positive and comforting thought in the poem. Lovely work, as usual. judi
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you, dear Judi, for reading my poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have been through all those stages, the final one was by far the best. Thanks, dear friend. :) Sandra xx
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You're welcome. This was so beautiful. judi
Comment from QC Poet
This minute captures the struggle of suffering pain that this life offers each person while struggling through an increasing faith calling out to our Lord for our salvation Thank you for taking us on a journey to Jesus Christ
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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This minute captures the struggle of suffering pain that this life offers each person while struggling through an increasing faith calling out to our Lord for our salvation Thank you for taking us on a journey to Jesus Christ
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you, QC, for reading my minute poem. You are right, and if everyone could understand this, how wonderful it would be. Thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written poem for the minute poem contest I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you also a very good day. May God bless you. Patricia .
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem for the minute poem contest I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you also a very good day. May God bless you. Patricia .
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Patricia! I'm glad you enjoyed my minute poem. And thank you for the best wishes in the contest! Warmest hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Jesus is always by our side. I'm so glad that we know Him as our Savior, the Almighty. I know I could never live without Him. I love your poem. You also treasure the moments with Him. I just got done doing a Bible Study on Proverbs 31. It was a wakening chapter!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Jesus is always by our side. I'm so glad that we know Him as our Savior, the Almighty. I know I could never live without Him. I love your poem. You also treasure the moments with Him. I just got done doing a Bible Study on Proverbs 31. It was a wakening chapter!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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I'm glad you liked my 'minute' poem, Rosemary. We all need Him in our lives, moreso these days where it seems to me, the devil is taking over so many leaders and taking them into war against the innocents Thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so beautifully versed in simple yet powerful sentiments of love and faith during a time of sadness and despair. Thank you so much, Sandra, for sharing this excellent minute poem. Best wishes Debbie xx
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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This is so beautifully versed in simple yet powerful sentiments of love and faith during a time of sadness and despair. Thank you so much, Sandra, for sharing this excellent minute poem. Best wishes Debbie xx
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Aw thank you, Debbie, for this lovely review. I think I needed Him beside me more after my brother died, and the following illness that kept me in hospital through December until a few days in January. He doesn't fail us at all, all we need is to ask. Thank you, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
I may not be religious, and truth be told I don't believe in it, but I understand and believe in Faith and I thought this was a beautiful poem. Very well written.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I may not be religious, and truth be told I don't believe in it, but I understand and believe in Faith and I thought this was a beautiful poem. Very well written.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I think there are many who have the same beliefs that you do, Desdinova. And they live their lives in goodness and faith. Thank you, dear friend, for your lovely review. I really appreciate it. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Begin Again
You, my friend, have no boundaries. You share your words and wisdom in ways I find difficult to comprehend. I have no idea what a minute poem is.....but what I do know are the words you shared and the blessed meaning they have to me. I must believe that he walks by your side and mine, leading us through our sorrows.
Beautiful!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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You, my friend, have no boundaries. You share your words and wisdom in ways I find difficult to comprehend. I have no idea what a minute poem is.....but what I do know are the words you shared and the blessed meaning they have to me. I must believe that he walks by your side and mine, leading us through our sorrows.
Beautiful!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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A minute poem is exactly that. There are 20 syllables in each of the 3 stanzas, 3 x 20 is 60. The amount of seconds in a minute. It can't be longer, or shorter. The first line has 8 syllables (seconds) the following three lines each have 4 syllables. So: 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. 60 syllables - 1 minute. Rhyme, aabb ccdd eeff
And there you have it. The first one I wrote I had now idea what a minute poem was, and I wrote 4 stanzas. It was disqualified, and I posted it as a 'One Minute Twenty Seconds' poem!! :))
Thank you for the lovely review, my sweet friend. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
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LOL...Making lemonade out of lemons! A one minute twenty second poem... wonderful! Smiles, Carol
