Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Good morning! An exceptionally good one by the sound of your poem... quite sultry and filled with temptation. Very well written and certainly led the reader deeper into the mood, Well done! Good luck in the contest.

Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

Hi there dear Carol, I am delighted to see that you are the very first one to read my Temptation poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Always appreciated,
Lisa

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I liked reading your poem. Alot of feeling went into the words . The picture is bright red so that adds that extra to the poem. (Temptation) well written great job

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

Hi there dearest Brenda, Thank you for reading and reviewing my work... I really appreciate your very kind review ... Yes...red...

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A passionate and compellingly engaging free verse which evolves perfectly to its climactic end. Your fine verse oozes sensuality - sound, smell, sight, movement. You've captured it all with touches of internal rhyme and alliteration within well crafted lines, enhancing fluency and enjoyment. Well done and good luck! Debbie

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

Dearest Debbie, Thank you for taking the time to read and review my Temptation poem. I am delighted that you understand the internal rhyme.
I always appreciate your reviews... and thank you for your good luck wishes... We will see what happens...