Street Voices
The voice of the streets- yes that's me in the photo32 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I'm not sure why you don't chainge locations, and try to develop a more positive, it's very hard feeling sorry who simply doesn't change their demeanour, it seems you enjoy being the victim, and you've never changed, I can't believe you want to be like that. Well done, Charity, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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I'm not sure why you don't chainge locations, and try to develop a more positive, it's very hard feeling sorry who simply doesn't change their demeanour, it seems you enjoy being the victim, and you've never changed, I can't believe you want to be like that. Well done, Charity, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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It's positivity in the pain and the struggle. I can only share what's real and I give many hope all over through my performance and poetry. You should try to see my poetry from a different perspective my friend. Nothing but respect for you tho.
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Change always comes from within not without Charity.
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I'm the messenger for the streets and those in the struggles. I'm doing what I'm called to do.
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Ok
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Wouldn't a message of hope be better than . one of hopelessness?
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed reviewing this and I particularly liked the use of similes and metaphors, It is very thought provoking throughout, although the comparison to Christ's Sacrifice did not resonate with me. I think I understand much of what you are writing and your use of colorful descriptions and sensory words does help a reader understand.
Note:
playing Spade(s)
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed reviewing this and I particularly liked the use of similes and metaphors, It is very thought provoking throughout, although the comparison to Christ's Sacrifice did not resonate with me. I think I understand much of what you are writing and your use of colorful descriptions and sensory words does help a reader understand.
Note:
playing Spade(s)
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thanks for your feedback.