Dancing under the moon
A night with the one you love.37 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
I can joy imagine a more fantastical night. There is never quite anything like spending time with that special lady.
Unless it is with two special ladies. But then you run out of hands. Ha! Just kidding.
Great poem!
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I can joy imagine a more fantastical night. There is never quite anything like spending time with that special lady.
Unless it is with two special ladies. But then you run out of hands. Ha! Just kidding.
Great poem!
D
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
Comment from mermaids
There is a feeling of love and romance in your words. The image of the couple dancing under the moon is vivid and clear. You have a smooth flow of rhyming words that creates a light feel to your poem.
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There is a feeling of love and romance in your words. The image of the couple dancing under the moon is vivid and clear. You have a smooth flow of rhyming words that creates a light feel to your poem.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
Comment from nancyjam
A sweet poem of love, as a couple dances under the moon.
Lovely imagery and good rhyming that touches the reader's heart.
Very romantic. I enjoyed reading it.
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A sweet poem of love, as a couple dances under the moon.
Lovely imagery and good rhyming that touches the reader's heart.
Very romantic. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
Comment from hullabaloo22
This is really nice, and has a lovely romantic feel. Perfect rhythm and rhyme, and the picture captured the described moment. The font you chose to use added that extra touch.
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This is really nice, and has a lovely romantic feel. Perfect rhythm and rhyme, and the picture captured the described moment. The font you chose to use added that extra touch.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
Comment from jessizero
No, I can't imagine a more romantic night! I enjoyed your rhymes as well as the mental image you painted with your words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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No, I can't imagine a more romantic night! I enjoyed your rhymes as well as the mental image you painted with your words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
Comment from Wendyanne
This is such a beautiful, romantic piece of poetry Willie. I could picture the scene and it made me feel quite envious! It's a long time since I've had a romantic dance with hubby lol
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This is such a beautiful, romantic piece of poetry Willie. I could picture the scene and it made me feel quite envious! It's a long time since I've had a romantic dance with hubby lol
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some fine memories here Willie as you turn back the clock to those younger days when you met your wife and danced together, I enjoyed your fine recollection here, love Dolly x x x
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Some fine memories here Willie as you turn back the clock to those younger days when you met your wife and danced together, I enjoyed your fine recollection here, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
