A Portal Opens
A brain injury results in opening another dimension.32 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
An interesting take on another dimension that I believe exists outside of fiction writing. Where else would souls come from, and where else would they go once dead. It's not so hard to believe, but let me end in asking why was the subject even driving?
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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An interesting take on another dimension that I believe exists outside of fiction writing. Where else would souls come from, and where else would they go once dead. It's not so hard to believe, but let me end in asking why was the subject even driving?
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Thank you for the review and comment. I don't think another dimension is hard to believe either. I probably should have left out the bit about driving, but I sometimes I find myself not deciding until the last minute as to what I want to do and I aways know when it comes time to turn. Also on one supernatural occasion when my daughter and I almost had an accident, some force took over and drove the car to avoid the accident and we definitely didn't have control of the wheel. We never figured that one out.
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Just like I wrote In What Shall I do recently. Do we actually think we are in control???
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"I'd hadn't" should probably be I hadn't.
"such away we" should be such a way we.
"populations" should be population.
"past the test" should be pass the test.
Would be glad to have the pain gone, too, then return to a familiar existence.
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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"I'd hadn't" should probably be I hadn't.
"such away we" should be such a way we.
"populations" should be population.
"past the test" should be pass the test.
Would be glad to have the pain gone, too, then return to a familiar existence.
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Thank you for once again finding errors I thought I had corrected. You have a sharp eye for detail. I always appreciate your reviews.
Beth