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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "For Sandra on Ian's Homegoing"
Sandra's brother Ian passed away

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Comment from JSD
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A sweet poem of tribute. Beautifully composed. Full of feeling encapsulated in assured rhyme and rhythm that just says all that needs to be said. Well done Helen. (I hope you liked the well deserved tribute in the Secret Admirer Contest.)

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much, John!
    I happened quite unexpectedly on that contest and now am so curious as to who the author was.
    Hugs!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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I give Sandra and Ian's mother a lot of credit for fostering the bond of the entire family around Ian and his special needs. A sibling is a part of our childhood, and I have found that losing one (I've lost two) is like losing a part of a special past that only you share.

A beautiful Kyrielle, Helen. So nice of you to share your talent with Sandra in her time of need.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
    So true, Pam. You understand completely.
    And I goofed when I said kyrielle - I was thinking Latin (Lord = kyrie) but the poetic form is a Minute poem. Maybe I need to change vitamins? Lol. Thanks so much! Hugs!
Comment from Paul Manton
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This must have been very hard to write. We all love and admire Sandra very much, but it is difficult to imagine her feelings at this moment. In Christian terms, we hope her brother is now with the Lord, his suffering ended. But bereavement, even in such circumstances, involves a great deal of grief and loss.

So, we pray for Sandra to be strengthened by the Lord in all the best memories of Ian, which she has, to keep for ever.

Love to you and to Sandra. From Paul

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
    Yes, we do all love Sandra. I appreciate your caring words and your prayers, Paul. Hugs and blessings!
Comment from royowen
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Such a terrible thing to happen, for those of us that have lost a brother, or sister, in this case Sandra's brother, Chris lost a favourite brother and knows what it feels, as I have also to cancer. A beautifully written minute poem, well done, thank you, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much for understanding. You and Chris were able to relate and encourage with your words. Hugs!
reply by royowen on 17-Nov-2023
    Well done
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Helen
a lovely poem for Sandra who will gain comfort through your caring words. Also through her FS family here who care for her
Cheers Chrisxx

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023
    Thank you for the understanding review, Chris! Hugs!
Comment from Sanku
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I am very sorry to hear this .A sibling leaving shakes up every one more than one way .I will send her a condolence message..
Well written kyrielle .

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
    Thank you for reviewing, Santha. I know she is touched by the many who have reached out to her.
    💖
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine poem for Sandra in her hour of grief Helen. She will appreciate your kind words here and your warm hearted support, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
    Thank you again, Dolly! I was wondering where her chapter was then I found out from her beautiful tribute on Facebook.
    Hugs!
Comment from karenina
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Oh, no... Thanks for posting this beautiful poem, and in doing so letting us know of Ian's passing...

My condolences to Sandra, and I will add to the book that Pam started!

Karenina

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much, Karenina!
    Please keep me posted on how you are.
    Hugs!
reply by karenina on 19-Nov-2023
    Will do! You stay well!
Comment from jmdg1954
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Helen,
Not until your post came in my message box was I aware of Sandra's brothers passing.

Your poem as always, magnificent! Words near and dear to your heart will touch hers when she read them.

Your notes then tells it like it is in daily life.

Than you for sharing. I will add to the book in a few days.

As always...
John

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much for reviewing, John. I loved your story for her.
    Hugs!
Comment from Wendy G
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A beautiful poem for Sandra which will certainly bring her comfort. If is always distressing to lose a family member to whom one is close. The close bond of love will always remain, but the greater the love the greater the pain. Thanks for sharing. I will join my prayer with yours for her comfort.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much, Wendy! Hope you are keeping safe with all that driving and making time to sleep enough.
    Hugs!