Soul-Searching
Where you hope to end up requires deep thought.34 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
This was another efficient and literate use of six small words. In your stories, your family always had a dramatic or entertaining experience, no matter what destination you decided upon!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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This was another efficient and literate use of six small words. In your stories, your family always had a dramatic or entertaining experience, no matter what destination you decided upon!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Jim. I really appreciate the review and comment. I need to get back on the stories about my family but I seem to being going through a block on that subject.
Beth
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It's hard to believe, but I guess blocks happen to even the best of writers! Hope you write more soon!
Comment from royowen
I think if one chooses the right way to go, it's one of two ways, they are intuitive, or better still they listen to God, ot they are perceptive, but if not one leaves it to chance, or luck, beautifully written Beth, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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I think if one chooses the right way to go, it's one of two ways, they are intuitive, or better still they listen to God, ot they are perceptive, but if not one leaves it to chance, or luck, beautifully written Beth, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Roy.Again I appreciate your review. I find the six poem hard to think of as poems. I like using a lot more words.
Beth
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They aren?t really, more tuned to the Japanese variety, I think for the newbies
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Beth. I enjoyed your interesting and thought-provoking six line 'poem' in which you have managed to use some good alliterative words. I agree with the sentiments . Good luck
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Hi Beth. I enjoyed your interesting and thought-provoking six line 'poem' in which you have managed to use some good alliterative words. I agree with the sentiments . Good luck
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Wendyanne. I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Tom Horonzy
And what has been written is true
Good luck with your entry despite my being required to spew out many
More syllables than is printed herein
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And what has been written is true
Good luck with your entry despite my being required to spew out many
More syllables than is printed herein
Inhgtxgvycfcgvfcgbhcfvhcfchcfxgvfxhbgcgbhv
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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I find it very difficult to call anything with six word a poems. I am not a fan of short poems or flashes. I'm surprised no one has come up with a one word poem. I just decided I was going enter all this free entry poems and see how it goes.
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Free is nice