Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

So very seasonal and spooky, Jessica. I must say that I did enjoy this haunting Halloween piece.

This was the creepiest:

The shadows cast a gleam in spite
Lost souls emerge, a spectral sight

Very fun! Hope I can sleep tonight!
D

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023

Thank you so much, Douglas! I do hope you slept! ;)
Xoxo
Jess

Comment from royowen

Excellent

As always an excellent work Jessica, the flow and narrative contest are excellent and the language rich content is a plus, the rhyming is really good, and it was a pleasure to read as always, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023

Thank you, Roy! That means so much to me.
Xoxo
Jess

reply by royowen on 31-Oct-2023

Most welcome

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Aaaahhhhh! I'm such a scardy-cat! This was spooky good, nonetheless, and certainly a winner in my eyes this Halloween. I hope you win!

Sending you my best today as always, dear Jess, and best wishes in the Halloween Poetry Contest.
Sal XOs

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023

LOL thank you, my Sally! It's fun to be creepy! ;)
Xoxoxo
Jess