Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent story. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I related to this because I have been a teacher of children with special, medical or educational needs. I find my country, merica, does have excellent healthcare and there are laws related to caring for those in need. I will get information to you after any contest. In America, we vowed to work toward a more perfect union.

Best wishes,

Alexandra

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023

Thank you Alexandra for your very kind words. Appreciated a lot.
Wendy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I had noticed that your posting had dwindled and I prayed that it had nothing to do with your son but I guess I knew in my heart it did. He is as lucky to have you in his life as you are to have him. He knows you would never let anything happen to him. Thank you for this update and here's to the quieter times ahead. Gretchen

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023

Thank you very much Gretchen for your care and compassion. I haven?t been able to think of much else at the moment. But I am in the middle of preparing an "ordinary"piece. I appreciate your kindness a great deal.
Wendy

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Oh dear Wendy, I can't begin to imagine what you've been going through and to describe yourself then as "exhausted" when I would be flat out on the floor. What an amazing service is being given to your lovely foster son; how brave and determined his spirit and how loving, resolute and strong you are in the face of this challenge. I know faith has sustained you and, at least, removed that burden of decision but this must be draining all your remaining resources and my only hope is that your writing will provide an iota of respite and peace. Thank you for sharing. My prayers and best wishes. Debbie x

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023

Thank you so much Debbie. Your loving caring words and compassion mean a lot, as do your prayers. Sincere thanks.
Wendy

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is amazing that the hospital and you have gone to such lengths and that he has endured pain and come through in better condition. I guess he understands why this was necessary to save his life and that you were there because you care so deeply. I hope can get the rest you need after this ordeal and you soon me rewarded with his smiles.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you very much Beth for your very caring words.
Wendy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am glad the surgeons have fought for him and removed all that fluid from his lungs, how awful. I shall include you both in my prayers Wendy, he sounds like a courageous man and you have been strong for him too, keep us updated, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you very much Dolly. Kind words. Much appreciated!
Wendy

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Here we have a non-fiction piece that really tugs at the heartstrings one moment and fills us with relief the next when we learn that the difficult operation has been successful. Well written indeed,

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Jim. Greatly appreciated.
Wendy