That Night in June
Reflections45 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
The early stages of a relationship that endures is filled with sweet memories. First impressions, bold flirtations, sweet sensations. Those memories come flooding back, bringing with them a longing for things to be, at least for a little while, as they once were so long ago.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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The early stages of a relationship that endures is filled with sweet memories. First impressions, bold flirtations, sweet sensations. Those memories come flooding back, bringing with them a longing for things to be, at least for a little while, as they once were so long ago.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Nomi and thank you for the beautiful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
Comment from Teri7
Janet, This is a very beautiful and beautifully written poem reflecting on that time in June and how much it meant to you both. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Janet, This is a very beautiful and beautifully written poem reflecting on that time in June and how much it meant to you both. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Teri and thank you for the beautiful review and precious six stars.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again dear friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautiful poem, it has so much love in it. There is also a wistful quality to it, a little sadness as well. Your words flow so effortlessly, I'm so honored to have read it.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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This is a beautiful poem, it has so much love in it. There is also a wistful quality to it, a little sadness as well. Your words flow so effortlessly, I'm so honored to have read it.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response and thank you for the beautiful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
Comment from Terry Broxson
Janet, I like your poem. The imagery is vivid, and can see everything. The repeat of the last line is well done. Your note makes the story a little bitter/sweet as life and age catch up. Excellent. Terry.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Janet, I like your poem. The imagery is vivid, and can see everything. The repeat of the last line is well done. Your note makes the story a little bitter/sweet as life and age catch up. Excellent. Terry.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Terry and thank you for the thoughtful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a good one Janet. In your last stanza, you switched to the past tense. You might think about using the past tense in the first three lines of all the stanzas.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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This is a good one Janet. In your last stanza, you switched to the past tense. You might think about using the past tense in the first three lines of all the stanzas.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Paul and thank you for the thoughtful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
Comment from damommy
A lovely poem with perfect meter and rhyme. Good alliteration throughout. Your poem conveys so many memories. It was a joy to read. You've worn a lot of hats.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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A lovely poem with perfect meter and rhyme. Good alliteration throughout. Your poem conveys so many memories. It was a joy to read. You've worn a lot of hats.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response and thank you for the thoughtful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
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That's all good news. We were praying for them.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A romantic night to remember here Janet, I adored the sentiments and the gentle progress of love here in your fine poem, good rhymes and flow, a joy to read, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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A romantic night to remember here Janet, I adored the sentiments and the gentle progress of love here in your fine poem, good rhymes and flow, a joy to read, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Dolly and thank you for the beautiful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent and emotional poem. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader. I'm sure many others will relate.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent and emotional poem. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader. I'm sure many others will relate.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Alexandra and thank you for the beautiful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
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I'm glad everyone is getting better and you're on to better days, my friend!.
Alexandra
Comment from royowen
What a great poem, written in your usual immaculate way Janet, the narrative works well in this contest, it's most certainly on task, and great rhyming, flow and a great narrative, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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What a great poem, written in your usual immaculate way Janet, the narrative works well in this contest, it's most certainly on task, and great rhyming, flow and a great narrative, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response Roy and thank you for the beautiful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
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Yes, they are very clever, these surgeons on fixing heart and other problems, we live in a blessed time,
Comment from JSD
Aww. A sweet and heartfelt poem. Beautifully written and so full of love and memories. I love the way you twist your refrain as the poem progresses. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Aww. A sweet and heartfelt poem. Beautifully written and so full of love and memories. I love the way you twist your refrain as the poem progresses. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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So sorry for this late response and thank you for the thoughtful review.
My husband is recovering nicely from heart surgery so hopefully we have many more tomorrows.
Grandson's brain surgery while he was traveling in Taiwan was also very successful and he is back home with family.
Everyday is a gift and we feel His blessings everyday.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings to you and yours.
Janet
