Sally's Sight
The Fabulous Free Versers Club Entry- colors37 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is lovely. She really seems to have an inner strength, I'm not sure I could face losing my sight with the same courage. I'm so glad you wrote this, thank you.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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This is lovely. She really seems to have an inner strength, I'm not sure I could face losing my sight with the same courage. I'm so glad you wrote this, thank you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your beautiful comment! Xo
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! You expertly portrayed dear Sally's soul with this artful free verse poem! From the beginning you show how her resilience treasures the transient "fleeting dawn." And you show us how she uses her artistry daily. And you finish with telling us about her faith, her "unbreakable sight."
Virtual six!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Wow! You expertly portrayed dear Sally's soul with this artful free verse poem! From the beginning you show how her resilience treasures the transient "fleeting dawn." And you show us how she uses her artistry daily. And you finish with telling us about her faith, her "unbreakable sight."
Virtual six!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much, Helen!!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from karenina
Oh, to be as gloriously graceful as Sally ~ who greats each new dawn ready to embrace "a fractured vision " ~~ I'm not convinced I would not be consumed with self pity! Never Sally... Eaxh prismatic glimpse of color is a blessing. As she is. As you are!
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Oh, to be as gloriously graceful as Sally ~ who greats each new dawn ready to embrace "a fractured vision " ~~ I'm not convinced I would not be consumed with self pity! Never Sally... Eaxh prismatic glimpse of color is a blessing. As she is. As you are!
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much, Karenina
Xoxoxo
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My pleasure...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet natured write for Sally, it is her birthday? Sally's poetry is always intuitive and inspirational and I enjoy her work, a fine post for the club Jessica, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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A sweet natured write for Sally, it is her birthday? Sally's poetry is always intuitive and inspirational and I enjoy her work, a fine post for the club Jessica, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly! Means the world.
Xoxo
Jessica
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You are most welcome x
Comment from royowen
What a marvellous poem you've written for Sally, she and I have been friends on-site for many years, she has been writing about her alter ego in Sally, the blind girl for quite sometime now, beautifully written, with beautiful language and expression, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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What a marvellous poem you've written for Sally, she and I have been friends on-site for many years, she has been writing about her alter ego in Sally, the blind girl for quite sometime now, beautifully written, with beautiful language and expression, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Roy. That means the world!
Xo
Jessica
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this tribute to Sally presented as a club entry. She is truly an inspiration to us all. She is a constant in my prayers. I enjoyed reading this poem. It's very well written.
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you for sharing this tribute to Sally presented as a club entry. She is truly an inspiration to us all. She is a constant in my prayers. I enjoyed reading this poem. It's very well written.
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much, Barbara!
Xo
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Sally's Sight, is rich in metaphor and so well captures the spirit, creativity, and sweet soul of Sally Law. I am a big fan of Sal and I think your poem captures her struggle to find the internal vision that can illuminate stories and then use whatever resources allow her to share with us.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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This poem, Sally's Sight, is rich in metaphor and so well captures the spirit, creativity, and sweet soul of Sally Law. I am a big fan of Sal and I think your poem captures her struggle to find the internal vision that can illuminate stories and then use whatever resources allow her to share with us.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Bill. That means so much.
Xo
Jessica