Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

OMG! Congratulations, Barbara!! I'm so excited for you! This chapter seems to be well written, as is, all of your writing. You always include authentic, believable dialogues, which bring the story to life for a reader like me. Best wishes on your accomplishment!! I will go back to read from the beginning! Have a wonderful day! Alexandra :))

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you for the support. I appreciate it.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

CONGRATULATIONS!!! How wonderful! Yes, I know how hard and time consuming it is to get published. Life has to be lived as well. LOL! Most of the greats left their life to write. You and I don't have that luxury.

All the best, Barbara dear, wishing you great success!
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you for the support. I appreciate it.

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

Barbara, I listen to a podcast every Friday where writer's are interviewed about their routines, specifically their writing routine. So many say that their characters begin to speak to them about what THEY want to say as the novel is being written. So, you're there with the best in that regard.

Good luck with your new publication, and many more successes!

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Unfortunately mine do it in the middle of night. I wish they would get on a better schedule. LOL Thank you for the support.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Well done, Barbara. Another book published is always good to see on your shelf. I hope it does well. I enjoyed reading it when you posted it on here. It's always nice to read it again without the wait for the next part.
Congratulations, my friend. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you for the support. My publisher has decided to really market this one. We'll see.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Of greatest importance is the fact it has been published and is available for reading. Congratulations on completing this task. Fr me, there are few things in life more pleasurable thab holding a book that you authored, bearing your name and likeness. You very quickly fall in love with yourself and your accomplishment.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you for the support. I don't do ebooks for that reason. I know I'm old fashioned but I want to hold a book.

reply by nomi338 on 10-Aug-2023

Me too.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

Good luck on your book. It is difficult to write a novel and becoming a success. All you need is much luck. I am happy you have published it. Congratulations! I hope you succeed.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you for your support.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Barbara, This sounds like another really good romance book you have written. I don't remember reading any of this on fanstory, but maybe I did. Thank you for sharing with us! Great dialogue and great descriptive words. Best wishes on your publication! Teri

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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you for the support. I wrote it back in 2019 - 2020.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Wow, congrats, doesn't matter how you got here; the most important thing is that is published. I think when you publish a book is the ultimate validation as a writer. I enjoyed reading this book on Fan Story.

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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023

Thank you for the support.