Redacted Education
Dialogue only32 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
I try not to use profanity in my writing, and you not only avoided it, but did it in a most creative way, showing with your writing the absurdities of these expletives. You found a way to use them and also not use them. And you did it in dialogue only!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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I try not to use profanity in my writing, and you not only avoided it, but did it in a most creative way, showing with your writing the absurdities of these expletives. You found a way to use them and also not use them. And you did it in dialogue only!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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Jim, thanks for reading. I was just having some fun. Terry.
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I know you were having fun, and I apologize if my words wer3e interpreted as criticism.
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Jim, no apology necessary! I knew exactly what you meant. Thanks.
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That's great, because I enjoy your work!
Comment from JSD
A little confusing at times; I can't always tell which word is which. Nevertheless, the relationship is amusing and the argument most entertaining.
John
"Poetry is the space between words."
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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A little confusing at times; I can't always tell which word is which. Nevertheless, the relationship is amusing and the argument most entertaining.
John
"Poetry is the space between words."
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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John, thank you for reading. I did think it was a bit confusing, but I thought it also added to the satire. Thanks, Terry.
