Comment from royowen

Excellent

Although I know this is only a story, these things happen, and I'm completely on the side of justice, men like our Pat Rogers need to be stopped, and jailed if necessary, but at the same time, they need a job to pay maintenance, another great episode Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : I hope you're (playing) attention.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023

Thank you for the kind review. My error has been corrected. Thank you for the catch.

reply by royowen on 09-Feb-2023

Most welcome

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Geez this story is really moving along. The character growth is great!

One catch:

I hope you're playing attention."
(paying)

Nice work, Barbara. This is a great book!

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023

Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help.

reply by Douglas Goff on 09-Feb-2023

1000 to 1. You have helped me oodles!

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023

You're sweet.