Comment from Sanku

Exceptional

Alexandra is simply brilliant .Reminded me of Portia in Merchant of Venice.
And a new twist .Lisa's baby is going to be a new headache for Rogers. I am enjoying this..

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Dang these are long chapters. Sticking with it because it's a good read and the story is developing nicely.

Below exhaled is over used. A better read if one is changed :

Alexandra exhaled. "Thank you. I'm sorry I can't stay and talk. I need to speak with my clients."

She led the ladies into a small vacant room. "You're doing wonderfully. Thank you for that. While we wait for them to talk, do you have any questions?"

Nancy exhaled. "Are you sure we aren't asking for too much money?"

Keep up the great work!

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022

I changed one of them. Thank you for the catch. Some people want me to post an expire chapter at once. I divided this one up into two parts. This is the second part. I feel that would be way too long. Thank you for sticking with me.

reply by Douglas Goff on 13-Nov-2022

Can?t help it. You are too good.

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022

Thank you!!!!!!!!