The Aspen Grove Murders
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Comment from Ricky1024
I loved how you interleaved the death with religious aspects.
Just keeps the reviewer and reader interested to see exactly how it's all going to come to a close?
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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I loved how you interleaved the death with religious aspects.
Just keeps the reviewer and reader interested to see exactly how it's all going to come to a close?
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, Doctor Ricky. How nice to have your eyes on this book. Your kindness is most appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment from poetwatch
It took a few lines for me to see your next character in Tommy Thomson, Sally. A new story with murder, mayham, angels and demons just what the doctor ordered. :) I missed chapter 1, but I'll read it. Thank you, Sally. I alway love reading dective stories, plus I'm learning.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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It took a few lines for me to see your next character in Tommy Thomson, Sally. A new story with murder, mayham, angels and demons just what the doctor ordered. :) I missed chapter 1, but I'll read it. Thank you, Sally. I alway love reading dective stories, plus I'm learning.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and for coming to my new book. So nice to have you here, Jose. Glad you like the theme. Do catch-up and chapter one because it is the pilot and has a lot of information to the story. I originally had it in the murder we wrote contest and withdrew it. It was the only entry that was a book chapter and I thought a book would be better suited. Here I am. Hang on. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
In my humble opinion this is your best story, yet. I really like it. You've done a great job writing the emotion and the descriptions. I can't wait to read more. This is really good. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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In my humble opinion this is your best story, yet. I really like it. You've done a great job writing the emotion and the descriptions. I can't wait to read more. This is really good. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Dear Barbara, thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. The stars are especially appreciated and I?m so thankful you?re on board for this one too. I think you?re going to really enjoy it. Stay tuned! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Douglas Goff
Wry interesting story. I didn't expect the angel demon thing towards the end.
In this sentence I don't think that the word former should be capitalized:
Something told me Former Chief Santucci had much .
Nice work on this!
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Wry interesting story. I didn't expect the angel demon thing towards the end.
In this sentence I don't think that the word former should be capitalized:
Something told me Former Chief Santucci had much .
Nice work on this!
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind help. Blessings to you always,
Sal :))
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I?m a team player, teammate!
