His Great Love and Mercy!
Jesus freed me of my sins so I could begin again In Him!42 total reviews
Comment from Nicolee Maree
I liked this a lot. You have a very powerful message to send and you did it quite well. Maybe your message will reach others and help them out of bad situations as well.
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I liked this a lot. You have a very powerful message to send and you did it quite well. Maybe your message will reach others and help them out of bad situations as well.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I find this powerful. Telepathically, he seems to speak only one word. It does not need to be defined in a sentence. He is described in that picture. This is his domain. I understand what you are saying and what you experienced. It is a beautifully written post. I appreciate you sharing this. My congratulations go out to you for being sober and clean. You are in God's hands.
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I find this powerful. Telepathically, he seems to speak only one word. It does not need to be defined in a sentence. He is described in that picture. This is his domain. I understand what you are saying and what you experienced. It is a beautifully written post. I appreciate you sharing this. My congratulations go out to you for being sober and clean. You are in God's hands.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from Heather Knight
This is incredibly beautiful. I like the story you tell both in your poem and your profile. Congratulations!
I also love the way you write. The words flow seamlessly. The lines are the right length...
Good luck in the contest.
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This is incredibly beautiful. I like the story you tell both in your poem and your profile. Congratulations!
I also love the way you write. The words flow seamlessly. The lines are the right length...
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from mermaids
Your testimony is beautiful in poetic form. I like your description of going down into the pit but God brings you out of it. A feeling of peace then comes your way, how great is God! Your poetic form is smooth and your vivid use of words brings forth faith in action. Excellent Christian poetry.
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Your testimony is beautiful in poetic form. I like your description of going down into the pit but God brings you out of it. A feeling of peace then comes your way, how great is God! Your poetic form is smooth and your vivid use of words brings forth faith in action. Excellent Christian poetry.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from bob cullen
A wonderfully created act of contrition that reads like the prayer it surely is. I have no doubt it attracted the forgiveness you sought. It's great to read of such Faith.
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A wonderfully created act of contrition that reads like the prayer it surely is. I have no doubt it attracted the forgiveness you sought. It's great to read of such Faith.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a great poem you have penned about the One I love so much also! He brought me back from so much and He is with me all the time, like He is with you. It is so good to see you writing about Him and what all He has done for you. May God bless you!Teri
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This is a great poem you have penned about the One I love so much also! He brought me back from so much and He is with me all the time, like He is with you. It is so good to see you writing about Him and what all He has done for you. May God bless you!Teri
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
This free verse tells of a deep fall because of badly chosen friends. I shows how prayer can be answered and a life can be totally changed by finding faith when you hit bottom and finally ask for help
I feel their are several areas that are grammatically incorrect. Also, you don't need punctuation at the end of each line. Maybe, try to write it as prose and see where you put your periods and commas and put them in the poem only in those places.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
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This free verse tells of a deep fall because of badly chosen friends. I shows how prayer can be answered and a life can be totally changed by finding faith when you hit bottom and finally ask for help
I feel their are several areas that are grammatically incorrect. Also, you don't need punctuation at the end of each line. Maybe, try to write it as prose and see where you put your periods and commas and put them in the poem only in those places.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from royowen
I don't think I've ever literally been on my knees before God, I certainly have metaphorically, it may be construed as spiritual pride if I did, without that, I know rebirth and service. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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I don't think I've ever literally been on my knees before God, I certainly have metaphorically, it may be construed as spiritual pride if I did, without that, I know rebirth and service. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from poetwatch
I'm glad you were saved, Fonda. :) Did you know the Lord Jesus honored his Father? You yourself stated it in "for He Shall Forever Be,/The Life, The Truth,/and The Way!" Through Jesus, we meet the Father and His name is Jehovah. Thank you for sharing and bless you.
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I'm glad you were saved, Fonda. :) Did you know the Lord Jesus honored his Father? You yourself stated it in "for He Shall Forever Be,/The Life, The Truth,/and The Way!" Through Jesus, we meet the Father and His name is Jehovah. Thank you for sharing and bless you.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022