The Return
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is terrific. You are a patient storyteller and that is a real asset. I thought this was well written and you did a good job of developing the characters. I like the use of internal thought in doing so. Easily kept my interest as it was enjoyable.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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This is terrific. You are a patient storyteller and that is a real asset. I thought this was well written and you did a good job of developing the characters. I like the use of internal thought in doing so. Easily kept my interest as it was enjoyable.
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, Michael, for reading this chapter. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful week! :)) Sandra xx
