Soft whispers
haiku34 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is beautiful! The picture of the huge moon with the darkened trees lurking and covering the moon so as to present a witching hour of the night is spectacular! Where oh where did you find it?
The moon leans in to whisper sonnets to the breeze is the most wonderful sounding poetry of all. And then the aha moment when you say that it is bewitching the earth is beautiful to the point of exaltations.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Jesse
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
This is beautiful! The picture of the huge moon with the darkened trees lurking and covering the moon so as to present a witching hour of the night is spectacular! Where oh where did you find it?
The moon leans in to whisper sonnets to the breeze is the most wonderful sounding poetry of all. And then the aha moment when you say that it is bewitching the earth is beautiful to the point of exaltations.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Jesse
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Jesse... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!! I found the pic on Google.
Melissa
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Oh. It's a great picture!
Have a wonderful week!
Jesse
Comment from Bridge
A lovely poem . What a lovely thought about the moon. Very creative. Very beautifully written. Thanks for sharing...................... With regards
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
A lovely poem . What a lovely thought about the moon. Very creative. Very beautifully written. Thanks for sharing...................... With regards
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Bridge... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an ambient and soothing verse Melissa and the thought of the moon whispering sonnets to the earth is touching and magical, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
This is an ambient and soothing verse Melissa and the thought of the moon whispering sonnets to the earth is touching and magical, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Dolly... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!!
Hugs, my friend.
Melissa
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You are most welcome Melissa x x
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Missed you recently. I like this and yet enchanting sits peculiar with me for some reason. Bewitching, though it menas the same, with the moon whispering sonnets, reads better. It's an opinion and everyone has one. What do I know of haiku?
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
Missed you recently. I like this and yet enchanting sits peculiar with me for some reason. Bewitching, though it menas the same, with the moon whispering sonnets, reads better. It's an opinion and everyone has one. What do I know of haiku?
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Hi Tom. I so liked your suggestion that I rushed over and edited it. :). Thanks so much for assessing it and finding a much better word.
Melissa
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Glad it felt right for you. Love the photograph.