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Requiem

Written for my beloved son H.W.G.

32 total reviews 
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent
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I am so sorry about your son. You wrote beautiful words to share his soul with nature. I didn't see any errors, and you painted a wonderful picture to treasure. Have a blessed evening. Shirley

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
    and yet sometimes it seems as though he's just out for the day and any minute his car wheels will spoil the gravel in the drive and he'll be bear hugging me "hello" and sniffing pots on the stove to see what's in them. No, it's a casserole in the oven. Even better. Memories, memories cheers Cass
Comment from jusylee72
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

So beautiful, so well placed words of grief and yet almost acceptance. How hard it is to lode a child whether they ar just born or older. I am sorry for your pain yet your words are comforting and I hope they comfort you.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
    Dear Jusylee 72, Thank you for your review and the AWESOME SIX STARS. My son was twenty seven when he passed away. These words were written more than twenty years ago. I found comfort in them then and do so now. Your kind words along with those of other readers bring a sense of closure to me which is a balm to my soul. Thank you most sincerely. cheers Cass