Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm trying to remember who Pat is, have we met him yet? He's not in your character list.
This was another excellent chapter, Barbara, we continue to see just how nervous Ali is, and how she is scared of saying or doing the wrong thing. It will take Cord a long time to get her over that slimeball ex of hers. Well done, my friend. I hope you have a lovely time with your son for his birthday. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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I'm trying to remember who Pat is, have we met him yet? He's not in your character list.
This was another excellent chapter, Barbara, we continue to see just how nervous Ali is, and how she is scared of saying or doing the wrong thing. It will take Cord a long time to get her over that slimeball ex of hers. Well done, my friend. I hope you have a lovely time with your son for his birthday. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Yes, we have met Pat and I added him this morning to my contest list. He forced his way at lunch with Ali last Monday. Cord and he have history, he doesn't like Cord because he's a Chicano. He own the bank in town. He was also in last weeks post. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh yes, I remember now! It's an age thing, Barbara! lol. Sorry! xxx
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LOL I understand.