Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

A snippet of history, and I love the accent in the dialogue to give this story authenticity. I felt I was a fly on the wall here as it felt real and lively. Much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022

Awwww, Dolly, I'm so stoked you stopped by to visit and leave your heartwarming comments. I hope to see you light on the wall of my next scene where Fanny will actually perform.

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022

Popping back by to amend for the gaff of not thanking you for the gorgeous chartreuse cross that leads the other five stars into battle. LOL, Thanks for that!

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Exceptional

So all this time, Fanny was imagining Juniper being there, resting her head on her laps, massaging her shoulders. In fact she was in prison. You tricked us. Now I want to find out why she was in prison. This is suspensive. You did a great job drawing me in. The Texas accent sounds real. Is this "knowed" (instead of "knew") for real?

Exceptionally done.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022

Yep on "knowed". We know that Fanny has been performing in Brady for 44 years. We know that Juniper has been incarcerated for 40 years. And we know that she killed Thurston Flourney.

Thank you, Lisa, for reading this and rewarding it with its first 6 stars. You are da bomb!