Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Anne Johnston
Another very interesting chapter in your story. I am not an expert in English grammar but there is one place I noticed that didn't sound right.
"The two we've lost is too many". Should it be "are too many"? Maybe either one is okay.
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Another very interesting chapter in your story. I am not an expert in English grammar but there is one place I noticed that didn't sound right.
"The two we've lost is too many". Should it be "are too many"? Maybe either one is okay.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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I am betting you're right. Did you read this before I had the money attached. I sure hope not. Thank you.
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No, but I did read it before you changed the font, it is much easier to read now.