Forest Memories
A Lover Looks Back75 total reviews
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I see, in your profile, you are trying to improve your craft. If this an example of your craft, you have accomplished that task. This is a beautifully sad and heartfelt write. Well deserving of the six.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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I see, in your profile, you are trying to improve your craft. If this an example of your craft, you have accomplished that task. This is a beautifully sad and heartfelt write. Well deserving of the six.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Wow, I am humbled! Thank you for reading, your insight, and the galaxy of stars! I am not really a poet, this was actually a devotional for a very special lady. I was overseas in the US Navy when my Mom wrote and said this beautiful, sensitive young lady had taken her life. I honor her memory and keep her in my heart.
Thank you again for looking at my profile. Don't post a lot, just when I have something worthwhile to say.
Cheers, irish
Comment from lindafisher
This poem is absolutely beautiful. So full of feeling. The rhyme and metre flow wonderfully and make the story so easy to read. It's a lovely tribute to a loved one. X
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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This poem is absolutely beautiful. So full of feeling. The rhyme and metre flow wonderfully and make the story so easy to read. It's a lovely tribute to a loved one. X
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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I am humbled! Your comments encourage me to greater efforts. You are one of the few reviewers who recognized this poem as a tribute to a lost loved one. She is gone from this earth, bt forever in my heart.
Take care, irish
Comment from harmony13
This is a beautiful devotional for your Dear Friend. The author's words
are heartfelt, detailed, expressed well, define memories and are creative.
I pondered on the love conveyed as I read these words. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Great Poem!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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This is a beautiful devotional for your Dear Friend. The author's words
are heartfelt, detailed, expressed well, define memories and are creative.
I pondered on the love conveyed as I read these words. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Great Poem!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading, your insight, and all the stars! You are one of the very few that saw this was a devotional. Your comments are very encouraging. I was overseas in the US Navy when my Mom wrote that this beautiful, sensitive young lady had taken her life. I tried to honor her memory.
Take care, irish
Comment from Jeff Flaig
Well done. The melody held throughout the poem, and it painted the right pictures for me. I can see this being an Irish poem.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Well done. The melody held throughout the poem, and it painted the right pictures for me. I can see this being an Irish poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Hi Jeff, thank you for reading, your insight (Did it take one to recognize one?), and all the stars! And, even my muse has a brogue. Had trouble getting this down as intended, tweaked and prodded, finally gave up before I wrecked it, and just posted.
Cheers! irish
Comment from SimianSavant
Great choice of picture for this piece. Are galleons are reference to the way the tree canopy moves? Or clouds? You mentioned it twice but I wasn't really sure. This piece is very intimate yet manages to do it artistically, without coming off as crass. Good work.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Great choice of picture for this piece. Are galleons are reference to the way the tree canopy moves? Or clouds? You mentioned it twice but I wasn't really sure. This piece is very intimate yet manages to do it artistically, without coming off as crass. Good work.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Hey, thanks for reading, your great comments, and all the stars! The galleons are the tall, majestic clouds sailing across an azure sky.
Took some tweaking to get this work presentable as a devotional.
Cheers, irish
Comment from write hand blue
Hi there, I found myself transported back in time by the vivid green woodland scene. So reminiscent of my childhood where we were surrounded by trees. A great poem with plenty of character and a magnetic read. Thank you for sharing. ~Mel~
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Hi there, I found myself transported back in time by the vivid green woodland scene. So reminiscent of my childhood where we were surrounded by trees. A great poem with plenty of character and a magnetic read. Thank you for sharing. ~Mel~
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Wow! Hi, Mel, thank you for reading, your great comments, and that galaxy of stars! I am humbled. Some people were confused by my calling the tall, majestic clouds galleons, but hey, that's what they remind me of-
Thanks again, I am encouraged!
irish
Comment from Artasylum
There are secret gardens and they hold our tender thoughts; about love and pain... things we are afraid to name, but, mostly precious moments that we want to visit over time... lovely, di
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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There are secret gardens and they hold our tender thoughts; about love and pain... things we are afraid to name, but, mostly precious moments that we want to visit over time... lovely, di
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Wow, what a great insight you have! Thank you for reading, your encouraging comments, and all the stars! Felt like this work kind of keeps her alive.
Take care,
irish
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It does... beautifully.
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed your lovely devotional to your dear friend and companion. Beautiful imagery and lovely alliteration throughout.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed your lovely devotional to your dear friend and companion. Beautiful imagery and lovely alliteration throughout.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Oh Wow, I am humbled! I really appreciate your reading, your encouraging comments, and that galaxy of stars!
Take Care, irish
Comment from RGstar
Virtual Six stars ++++++
I wish I had a six for this dear Author.
You brought the calm, you whistled the wind, and you took the aura and imagery to another level f tenderness and vision.
I so enjoyed the read where you quietly took us through thought...and beyond.
My best wishes.
A lovely poem.
Have a great week.
RGstar
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Virtual Six stars ++++++
I wish I had a six for this dear Author.
You brought the calm, you whistled the wind, and you took the aura and imagery to another level f tenderness and vision.
I so enjoyed the read where you quietly took us through thought...and beyond.
My best wishes.
A lovely poem.
Have a great week.
RGstar
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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I am humbled, such a great review from a Real Poet, which I am not, just an amateur who has a fantastic Muse who inspires, interacts, and watches over my shoulder.
Thank You for reading, great insight, and the stars!
irish
Comment from ESOSTINE
It really touched my soul as I could identify with this poem. Heart felt love is always surrounded by sweet memories of time and moments shared together, and space left by departed Love remains impossible to fill. Well done, dear IRISHAUTHORME.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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It really touched my soul as I could identify with this poem. Heart felt love is always surrounded by sweet memories of time and moments shared together, and space left by departed Love remains impossible to fill. Well done, dear IRISHAUTHORME.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading, your encouraging comments, and all those stars! This devotional took a while, a real memory.
Take care, irish
