God On Deen
God whispers to Deen's son Jeen35 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
I like your spiritual story, I feel it told me everything I needed to know, and you used the three required words. You did an excellent job with this prompt. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
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I like your spiritual story, I feel it told me everything I needed to know, and you used the three required words. You did an excellent job with this prompt. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A short story ending in a faith message.
The flow is good. The message is clear. The language is plain and straight forward. The message comes forth as possibly political as well as religious.
An interesting read.
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A short story ending in a faith message.
The flow is good. The message is clear. The language is plain and straight forward. The message comes forth as possibly political as well as religious.
An interesting read.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
Comment from humpwhistle
An interesting prompt, indeed. The subject reminds me of a piece you posted recently. I'm wondering if someone close to you received the vaccination and died recently? In any case, I wish you the best luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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An interesting prompt, indeed. The subject reminds me of a piece you posted recently. I'm wondering if someone close to you received the vaccination and died recently? In any case, I wish you the best luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
Comment from royowen
Yes, there's always a reason for someone passing away, ask God. But those reasons are not necessarily obvious or manifest in this life. Beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
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Yes, there's always a reason for someone passing away, ask God. But those reasons are not necessarily obvious or manifest in this life. Beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear Mr. D.R.,
I enjoyed reading your spiritual fiction piece. It is sad that the vaccines do not stop this plague, only lessen some of the symptoms. So many are dying and all we can do is pray they knew God. Great writing job.
Blessings,
Darlene
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Dear Mr. D.R.,
I enjoyed reading your spiritual fiction piece. It is sad that the vaccines do not stop this plague, only lessen some of the symptoms. So many are dying and all we can do is pray they knew God. Great writing job.
Blessings,
Darlene
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022