Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

A well-crafted story, Barb...
I did not know that you are a cancer survivor. That said, I am so grateful to know that you survived, and I find your work incredibly realistic and thoughtful.
I appreciate the details you include in your story and the realism of the situation and characters.

Thank you for sharing!
diane


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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

Thank you for the encouragement.

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

What a special story... it feels like something you know first hand... well done. This line touched me I was sitting inside of the words when I read it and had to stop to sit on that loveseat.

The silence continued until the sun started to set. Gabriel pecked her cheek. "What's the next step? Do you know?"

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022

Thank you for the encouragement.