Tribute to Crzypntr.
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Comment from l.raven
OK Girl, now I'm in tears...what a wonderful thing
to do Robyn....leave it up to you to write a poem like this...right from the heart...right from his heart...
he was such a talented writer...I am at a loss of words
sweet one...I know Amber will love it...I love your poem you...and love the picture sweet girl...very NICELY written...love much...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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OK Girl, now I'm in tears...what a wonderful thing
to do Robyn....leave it up to you to write a poem like this...right from the heart...right from his heart...
he was such a talented writer...I am at a loss of words
sweet one...I know Amber will love it...I love your poem you...and love the picture sweet girl...very NICELY written...love much...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Aaawww... Well, then, I guess that means you like it. I was pleased with it. Which doesn't happen often, really. And if Amber likes it - then I'm thrilled. Thank you again for letting us know. Hugs-
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then be thrilled...she will love it...
your always so welcome you...bigger hugs back at you...love xxoo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like this poem on stars, they appear so far or near, one could touch, one feels, but they never; I like the order and free flow of thoughts, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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I like this poem on stars, they appear so far or near, one could touch, one feels, but they never; I like the order and free flow of thoughts, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Jay Squires
I must say, I don't recall reading any of August's poems ... anything of his, I guess. I first heard of his dying by Roy Owen who wrote a tribute to him. I can't think of two better to pay tribute to August than the beacons of light you are.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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I must say, I don't recall reading any of August's poems ... anything of his, I guess. I first heard of his dying by Roy Owen who wrote a tribute to him. I can't think of two better to pay tribute to August than the beacons of light you are.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Jay. You are a sweetie. Hugs-
Comment from royowen
Hi Robyn, I've set up a multi author thing, even though I did it dumbly. It would be great if you'd contribute. August was one of my most enthusiastic followers, a talented and devoted man himself, he will be missed, a good man, and a tragic ending. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Hi Robyn, I've set up a multi author thing, even though I did it dumbly. It would be great if you'd contribute. August was one of my most enthusiastic followers, a talented and devoted man himself, he will be missed, a good man, and a tragic ending. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Roy. This should have appeared in that book. I hope it did, right? Thanks for creating it. Hugs-
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful way to pay tribute to this poet. I don't know him but you gave me an inkling of what his poetry was like. Loved how you used some of his phrases to craft such a beautiful poem for him.
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Wonderful way to pay tribute to this poet. I don't know him but you gave me an inkling of what his poetry was like. Loved how you used some of his phrases to craft such a beautiful poem for him.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Helen.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this tribute of this wonderful FS poet with us. I am not familiar with is work. I can tell from your poem and others I've read that it my loss. Again, thank you.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you for sharing this tribute of this wonderful FS poet with us. I am not familiar with is work. I can tell from your poem and others I've read that it my loss. Again, thank you.
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Barb.
Comment from Dr. Nad
You have reached into the soul of the dearly departed and gently cradled a piece of his art in your fingertips. Lovingly and masterfully you extricated bits and pieces, then you crafted a memorial that shines a well-deserved spotlight on the artist we knew as August. Thanks
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You have reached into the soul of the dearly departed and gently cradled a piece of his art in your fingertips. Lovingly and masterfully you extricated bits and pieces, then you crafted a memorial that shines a well-deserved spotlight on the artist we knew as August. Thanks
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Wow. Dr. Nad. The verbiage in this review is so precious and bright. You are such a dear. I think we are going to get along reeaaallly well. *smile* Thank you so much!
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You are welcome, Robyn. Thanks for your commitment to inviting greatness out of your fellow FanStorians.
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you're sweet.
Comment from SHABAMO
Very sweet poem on penguins, I liked the way you used your art.
Thwart is not quite a rhyme with heart, if you are good with a near rhyme then no problem, alternatively you could perhaps go with heavy clouds can dart (implying they are moving over and blocking light). I think your way is better, but just an option for you.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Very sweet poem on penguins, I liked the way you used your art.
Thwart is not quite a rhyme with heart, if you are good with a near rhyme then no problem, alternatively you could perhaps go with heavy clouds can dart (implying they are moving over and blocking light). I think your way is better, but just an option for you.
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Hmmm... I have no idea where you got the penguins. And yes, I'm fine with near rhymes, I use them heavily. Though in the South, heart and thwart rhyme quite nicely. *smile*
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