Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Tony,

What a fun rhyming pair in 'omnibus' and 'all of us'! Delightfully unexpected. hahaha

You syllable count is just right -- and the message is very cool. I mean, ever since Rosa Parks, everyone is equal on public conveyances. Unless -- you are just LOOKING for moments of racism. You often find the things you are looking for. --sigh--

Thanks for a smart one that made me think a bit. Good luck and Hugs-

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Robyn. Good of you to drop by. London Transport is a great leveller. All the best, Tony

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Welcome aboard life with all of us! Nice poem made from only 20 syllables is not easy to do. Your's does nicely. Good luck with the contest! God bless!
Patty

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Patty. Good of you to drop by. Glad you enjoyed it. All the best, Tony

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written twenty syllable poem about life that is like an omnibus that offers transportation to everyone who wants to ride in it wherever their destination will be.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Sandra. Good of you to drop by. Glad you liked it. All the best, Tony

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Great image and
good presentation, Tony.
-You have used your 20
syllables well.
-A good topic, imagery,
rhyme and comparison of
life to an omnibus.
-I like the positive and
upbeat message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks very much for your review and kind words, Pam. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.

reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Oct-2020

You are very welcome, Tony. I was going to comment that I liked the description on the omnibus about the Magical History Tour!

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hello Tony, clever use of twenty syllables giving a good message. These forms are not easy but this is well written without sounding contrived to meet the requirements of this form. Nice Picture of a good old London bus. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Dorothy. Good of you to drop by. Glad you liked it. All the best, Tony

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A feast of words in every edition to take us on a new journey each time and I loved the play on word here and I want a ticket to board please, much enjoyed Tony, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Dolly. Good of you to drop by. In the words of Flanders and Swann, 'Hold very tight, please! Ding! Ding!' All the best, Tony

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

How clever and cute. A great message as well, that there is room on the bus for all of us, so let's all get together. I've always wanted to ride on one of those busses. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020

I'm glad you enjoyed this microscopic poem! Thanks for reviewing. I hope that you one day manage to get that bus ride.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

You've used the double meaning of 'transport' to effect. Life's not a free ride; there'll always be those who want the top deck for a better view, with the others jammed in on the lower seats.

(I see we're off to Tower Hill - I hope we don't get locked up or beheaded.)

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, LisaMay. Good of you to drop by. I enjoyed your comments. All the best, Tony

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how you rhymed (or near rhymed) the first two lines. We don't have much say in life what class or type of transportation we will be placed in but we can board with a positive attitude! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review of this micro-poem, Helen. Good of you to drop by. I enjoyed your comments. All the best, Tony

Comment from Mary Furlong

Exceptional

What a delightful entry in the twenty word poem contest. Effortlessly charming (at least you've made it seem so.) The rest of us need to look to our laurels. The best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020

I appreciate your review of this micro-poem, Mary. Good of you to drop by, and thank you very much for bestowing a sixth star. All the best, Tony