Now I Don't Remember
Loop poem: An old lady's jumbled memories.21 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I agree that loop poems are too hard to write and on top of it, we have to follow a rhyme scheme, too. But you did it all perfectly! And it makes perfect sense by having your narrator be someone with some amount of dementia. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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I agree that loop poems are too hard to write and on top of it, we have to follow a rhyme scheme, too. But you did it all perfectly! And it makes perfect sense by having your narrator be someone with some amount of dementia. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your remarks. I thought I was pretty clever to be forgetful and repetitive for the poem! (I hope it doesn't happen in real life)