Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Beyond the Blue Sky"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from amada
This is a beautiful poem to bless the skies, the color blue is an enticing color to look at the skies, to reflect above our daily life. I celebrate that we still have a blue sky...
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This is a beautiful poem to bless the skies, the color blue is an enticing color to look at the skies, to reflect above our daily life. I celebrate that we still have a blue sky...
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from rjuselius
Wow! This is an exceptional piece of poetry dear jlr! I love the imagery and the soft sentiment. A fine poem with a lot of kudos. Bravo my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
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Wow! This is an exceptional piece of poetry dear jlr! I love the imagery and the soft sentiment. A fine poem with a lot of kudos. Bravo my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Rebekka, I am so very grateful for the six star review and kudos, I send you a virtual high-five to share throughout, what I hope is, a splendid week for you!
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My pleasure entirely <3
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My pleasure entirely <3
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The descriptions you used in the last part had me close my eyes and imaging the dark with the sparkling scattered. I love pieces that can do that for me. Very well done for the challenge
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The descriptions you used in the last part had me close my eyes and imaging the dark with the sparkling scattered. I love pieces that can do that for me. Very well done for the challenge
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Barb, I so enjoy reading comments, such as you have shared, it provides a feeling of validation of my free verse poem. Have a splendid week.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about blue that represents the skies overhead daily when the sun shines we see bright blue skies all around us and maybe some white puffy clouds that promise some rain.
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A very well-written free verse poem about blue that represents the skies overhead daily when the sun shines we see bright blue skies all around us and maybe some white puffy clouds that promise some rain.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Sandra, I delight that you enjoyed this free verse, have a great week!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your poem is unique and creative. It is a good reminder for each one to look up and focus on our life here below striving to point our soul onward. Well done!
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Your poem is unique and creative. It is a good reminder for each one to look up and focus on our life here below striving to point our soul onward. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
You make the color of blue the color of heaven and a metaphysical view of the effects of that sky color. Love that picture, too, like one taken from a plane. Lovely!
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You make the color of blue the color of heaven and a metaphysical view of the effects of that sky color. Love that picture, too, like one taken from a plane. Lovely!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
This horizonal poem looks like a seascape, which adds to that sense of vastness that stretches endlessly, as indeed so does eternal life, and the vastness of the universe. Beautifully written my friend, I can see how your attitude had changed toward stretching yourself, well done, blessings, Roy
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This horizonal poem looks like a seascape, which adds to that sense of vastness that stretches endlessly, as indeed so does eternal life, and the vastness of the universe. Beautifully written my friend, I can see how your attitude had changed toward stretching yourself, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Thank you
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Well done
Comment from nancyjam
I love this beautiful free verse entry. You use the prompt "blue" to magical effect here, as you gaze toward heaven and travel the various shades from morning to night.
Beautiful descriptive language. Inspiring!
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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I love this beautiful free verse entry. You use the prompt "blue" to magical effect here, as you gaze toward heaven and travel the various shades from morning to night.
Beautiful descriptive language. Inspiring!
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Nancy, smiling in spirit, thank you.
Comment from Cindy Decker
JLR,
All the imagery of this poem is deep and really beautiful. It stays in my mind, long after I've read it. The beveled sapphires that shine in your sky, are ones I search for.
Exceptional work.
Good luck in the contest..
Best wishes,ð??·
Cindy
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JLR,
All the imagery of this poem is deep and really beautiful. It stays in my mind, long after I've read it. The beveled sapphires that shine in your sky, are ones I search for.
Exceptional work.
Good luck in the contest..
Best wishes,ð??·
Cindy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
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Cindy, smiling back, thank you.
Comment from Carlos' girl
Beautiful poem i like.
very much. The dreams and travels of the author are beautifully depicted for us, the readers. The gradient of blue hues are encountered
. Stunning work
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Beautiful poem i like.
very much. The dreams and travels of the author are beautifully depicted for us, the readers. The gradient of blue hues are encountered
. Stunning work
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Carlos? girl,thanks for the review and comments.
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You're welcome
