Save The Children
A contest poem...34 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Diana. Your few words, six as required, speak volumes about the sad state of child trafficking. Your notes are informative. Your image ia s great match to you meaningful words. I like the way the font changes from dark to light in your last line--it emphasizes your point well.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Diana. Your few words, six as required, speak volumes about the sad state of child trafficking. Your notes are informative. Your image ia s great match to you meaningful words. I like the way the font changes from dark to light in your last line--it emphasizes your point well.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of the six words allowed for this contest.
Exposure IS the beginning of the remedy for child sex trafficking and so many other horrific things.
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You have made excellent use of the six words allowed for this contest.
Exposure IS the beginning of the remedy for child sex trafficking and so many other horrific things.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from karenina
Lots of things eat up our time--particularly when we have, oh, a pandemic swirling like a storm run amok! You just do what you have to do and we'll all be here when you have a minute or three.
Excellent six word poem. Hard to be so emotionally impactful in those constraints, I think--but with your image and well chosen words you pulled at my heart!
Nice to see a post from you!
Karenina
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Lots of things eat up our time--particularly when we have, oh, a pandemic swirling like a storm run amok! You just do what you have to do and we'll all be here when you have a minute or three.
Excellent six word poem. Hard to be so emotionally impactful in those constraints, I think--but with your image and well chosen words you pulled at my heart!
Nice to see a post from you!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I thought this was a powerful poem told in just two short lines. The more exposure we can bring of horrific events to the world, the more power it has. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
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I thought this was a powerful poem told in just two short lines. The more exposure we can bring of horrific events to the world, the more power it has. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from mauial
Short and powerful statement on such a horrific thing. The use of colors on the words really emphazize the meaning of Exposure the weapon, Dark to light. What really puzzles me is what misfires inside a person to do such things.
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Short and powerful statement on such a horrific thing. The use of colors on the words really emphazize the meaning of Exposure the weapon, Dark to light. What really puzzles me is what misfires inside a person to do such things.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from judiverse
Excellent idea for your six word contest entry. The presentation is lovely. Awareness of the problem of child trafficking is important if anything is to be done about it. Your words are effective in making your point, and best of luck in the contest. judi
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Excellent idea for your six word contest entry. The presentation is lovely. Awareness of the problem of child trafficking is important if anything is to be done about it. Your words are effective in making your point, and best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hello my friend and welcome back and thank you for sharing this piece of your heart and creating awareness for this nasty reality of our lives. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend and welcome back and thank you for sharing this piece of your heart and creating awareness for this nasty reality of our lives. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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And a fine day to you as well!! :). Appreciate you stopped to show support for these babies...it is the saddest issue on our planet. I?m loving your profile pic! How beautiful you are! Again, have missed you much! Since Covid, I have my son, my grandson & and his wife and child here with me due to loss of work. Thankfully, I work for an ?essential? business, so we have never shut down. God is good to say the least. It gets so busy around here, it makes it hard to focus on writing, while also dealing with the state of our country and the upcoming election. It?s good vs evil, not Dem vs Rep. I shall return soon! LoL. Stay well my precious friend! xoxoxo
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:) All is going to be ok with God's help
Comment from jaded831
Thank you for posting this poem, this is a horrible thing happening all over the world. We need more people to stand up for these children. Your picture is sad but is perfect for your poem. This is not a happy subject.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you for posting this poem, this is a horrible thing happening all over the world. We need more people to stand up for these children. Your picture is sad but is perfect for your poem. This is not a happy subject.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you for taking time to read. This subject is just as much in full force as the virus and riots, but media doesn?t seem interested in discussing. Our President has been on this since he was first elected. If interested, and hopefully I won?t be offending you, here is a video that will reveal how very deep this all is. There is also so much more about the tunnels below under D.U.M.B. (deep military underground bases) on YouTube, xoxoxo
https://youtu.be/YyiUB-NSLhg
Comment from Sally Law
This is one of the many gross sins of our day. Jesus promised a terrible judgment to anyone who hurts a little one, in or out of the womb. Jesus sais all those who hurt a little one, will be tied to a millstone and cast into the sea. Worse still, is the hell that awaits them. Hell must be loading up to full capacity these days.
Thank you for shining light and truth. I stand with you and hope you win the contest. The winner in my eyes.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.......xo................
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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This is one of the many gross sins of our day. Jesus promised a terrible judgment to anyone who hurts a little one, in or out of the womb. Jesus sais all those who hurt a little one, will be tied to a millstone and cast into the sea. Worse still, is the hell that awaits them. Hell must be loading up to full capacity these days.
Thank you for shining light and truth. I stand with you and hope you win the contest. The winner in my eyes.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.......xo................
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Mwah!!! First, you are so very welcome for the ?strawberries?. I do hope they were yummy! I just thank God that he provided right when I needed to bless and uplift you. I?m so glad you saw this and stopped to read. I had reserved for this contest and, of course, you know where my mind is focused right now, this is what my muse said to write for this contest. I?m sure my writing will evolve some coming out on the other side of this turmoil. And I love the idea of doing a book of poetry together. What a great idea! One project like that is something I could focus on with the time I have. It gets so busy here with son, grandson/his wife and their son. My GG son is on my phone more than me, but it?s educational games and videos, so how can I refuse! LoL. I?m on my way now to my sister?s, so I?ll try to give you a call tomorrow maybe late afternoon or so once I?m back home and settled :). Sending big love to FL today and everyday! xoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem with great impact. There are too many children abused and trafficked in the world that goes beyond our comprehension but the country is in uproar about a drug addict that seems to be killed by the hands of the police.
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A very well-written six-word poem with great impact. There are too many children abused and trafficked in the world that goes beyond our comprehension but the country is in uproar about a drug addict that seems to be killed by the hands of the police.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020