Of Power, Words, and Intentions
When one's current actions are seen in light of one's past40 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is a very powerful poem that speaks such an important truth. When all the protests settle down and it's time for our communities and our politicians to get to work, we'll see just how much has changed. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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This is a very powerful poem that speaks such an important truth. When all the protests settle down and it's time for our communities and our politicians to get to work, we'll see just how much has changed. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Hello Louise!
So pleased my words resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from pharp
Exceptional job in the penning of this beautiful poem that brought tears to my eyes. We should always be truthful in all that we say and do. Your message is powerful and touched my heart. Thanks for sharing and may God's blessings continue to shine upon you.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Exceptional job in the penning of this beautiful poem that brought tears to my eyes. We should always be truthful in all that we say and do. Your message is powerful and touched my heart. Thanks for sharing and may God's blessings continue to shine upon you.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Hello Portia!
I am honored by your exceptional rating and moving review despite my being so late to reply!
So very pleased my words resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written swap quatrain about the power of our words can hurt the soul but when our words are not put into actions to show it is true and we can bring change for the better of all.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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A very well-written swap quatrain about the power of our words can hurt the soul but when our words are not put into actions to show it is true and we can bring change for the better of all.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Hello Sandra!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is an eloquent poem and its message is clear. The one thing I'm not sure of is who you are addressing. Is it a Politician or a Teacher or is it America? :)Ralf
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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This is an eloquent poem and its message is clear. The one thing I'm not sure of is who you are addressing. Is it a Politician or a Teacher or is it America? :)Ralf
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Hello Ralf!
Two teachers.
One administrator.
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear M K T, your authors notes spend time explaining the swap quatrain, but the content of this poem is a scathing indictment of a recognized professional person, whom you graciously hope has repented.
I truly wish I could join you in that hope, but for too long I have studied the ways of professional hypocrites.
I wish to complement you for both this well-crafted poem and your manner of voicing a true concern.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Dear M K T, your authors notes spend time explaining the swap quatrain, but the content of this poem is a scathing indictment of a recognized professional person, whom you graciously hope has repented.
I truly wish I could join you in that hope, but for too long I have studied the ways of professional hypocrites.
I wish to complement you for both this well-crafted poem and your manner of voicing a true concern.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Hello Suzanna!
My apologies for being so late in my reply!
Know for a certainty that I appreciate your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
thank you!
diane
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your swap quatrain. You bring an interesting reflection - don't know if it's an acquaintance who was a teacher or a politician that has done an about face about racist views. But we can hope, that there was personal change. I like the peaceful protest in your picture and the sweet picture of the kids at the bottom.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Great job with your swap quatrain. You bring an interesting reflection - don't know if it's an acquaintance who was a teacher or a politician that has done an about face about racist views. But we can hope, that there was personal change. I like the peaceful protest in your picture and the sweet picture of the kids at the bottom.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Good Heavens, Helen!
I am so late with my replies; been spending too much time trying to sort out the world's affairs while digging in my gardens!
So pleased you enjoyed this offering.
Much appreciated!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from LisaMay
Hatred and lies and bigotry seem to suddenly fade (hypocritally) when a certain someone is seeking re-election. Yes, a changed attitude is possible with genuine insight, but I don't believe it is possible in some because they will never be able to see the real truth and take it into their own lives.
Your poem is powerful and thought-provoking, a fitting accompaniment to the present surge of emotion to redress systemic bias in society.
I love that pic of the 3 children.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Hatred and lies and bigotry seem to suddenly fade (hypocritally) when a certain someone is seeking re-election. Yes, a changed attitude is possible with genuine insight, but I don't believe it is possible in some because they will never be able to see the real truth and take it into their own lives.
Your poem is powerful and thought-provoking, a fitting accompaniment to the present surge of emotion to redress systemic bias in society.
I love that pic of the 3 children.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Hello Lisa!
Hoping you are still on your holiday adventure and enjoying yourself!
I apologize for the lateness of my review; hours upon hours digging in my gardens!
So pleased my words resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from June Sargent
Kudos to you for your honest appraisal of what many are doing now - trying to erase the past. But hopefully, the efforts are sincere - decisve action rather than just reaction in the heat of the moment. Racism is alive and well - there is not white-washing it. Is this really the kind of world we want for our children and grandchildren?
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Kudos to you for your honest appraisal of what many are doing now - trying to erase the past. But hopefully, the efforts are sincere - decisve action rather than just reaction in the heat of the moment. Racism is alive and well - there is not white-washing it. Is this really the kind of world we want for our children and grandchildren?
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Good Lord, June!
My sincere apologies for being so late with my reply!
Too many hours attempting to sort out in my head what is going on in this world ... all the while digging in my gardens.
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review...
diane
Comment from Margaret Bednar
This poetry form is something I stand in admiration of. You carried it out well, along with a subject matter that isn't easily conveyed in a poetic voice - but you carried it off! Well penned.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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This poetry form is something I stand in admiration of. You carried it out well, along with a subject matter that isn't easily conveyed in a poetic voice - but you carried it off! Well penned.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Hello Margaret!
GAWD!
So late in my reply: attempting to sort out the woes of the world while digging in my gardens.
I am pleased that my words resonated with you, and I apologize for taking so long to get back to you! Know that I most certainly appreciate your words as well.
Thank you!
diane
Comment from nomi338
This is one of the best poems on this subject that I have ever read. Not only is the rhyming pattern clever, the poem actually says something important. It is nice to read a poem that sounds nice and is appealing to the eye, but to me, if the poem does not elicit a feeling that is evocative and in harmony with what the writer is trying to say, it is a failure. I wish that the entire world could read your powerful words. They are truly thought provoking and wise.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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This is one of the best poems on this subject that I have ever read. Not only is the rhyming pattern clever, the poem actually says something important. It is nice to read a poem that sounds nice and is appealing to the eye, but to me, if the poem does not elicit a feeling that is evocative and in harmony with what the writer is trying to say, it is a failure. I wish that the entire world could read your powerful words. They are truly thought provoking and wise.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Good Morning, nomi!
I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review despite my lateness in replying! Please accept my apologies!
So very pleased my words resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
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No worries my friend. Late is always preferred to never.
