Joined at the Hip
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "The Pitchfork!"Bill and Cathy's hearts beat as one!
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Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Wow! How I enjoyed reading this! Everything happens at an enormous speed. Just like the tornado all try to run away from. Some could get to a shelter in time, others were not so lucky. I had to laugh finding out that the moonshine did its inevitable work. But poor grandfather with the pitchfork in his chest, now that is not so much to laugh about. Let's see the next time how that turns out...
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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Wow! How I enjoyed reading this! Everything happens at an enormous speed. Just like the tornado all try to run away from. Some could get to a shelter in time, others were not so lucky. I had to laugh finding out that the moonshine did its inevitable work. But poor grandfather with the pitchfork in his chest, now that is not so much to laugh about. Let's see the next time how that turns out...
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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A "SALUTE," Marion! Great hearing from you. Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words and taking time to read our work. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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So welcome!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This seems to have so much action. A tornado and a pitchfork accident (I assume, until the next chapter explains what happened, I surmise) in one chapter. I was just going to point out one word: The toronado musta picked me up
I think you mean 'tornado' even with the other creative Southern spelling.
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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This seems to have so much action. A tornado and a pitchfork accident (I assume, until the next chapter explains what happened, I surmise) in one chapter. I was just going to point out one word: The toronado musta picked me up
I think you mean 'tornado' even with the other creative Southern spelling.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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A "SALUTE," Crystie! Thanks for the review, kind words and taking time to read our work. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You already know how much I enjoyed reading you two's posts. You both work together wonderfully for our reading pleasure. The descriptions and, of course, another cliff hanger are both really good.
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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You already know how much I enjoyed reading you two's posts. You both work together wonderfully for our reading pleasure. The descriptions and, of course, another cliff hanger are both really good.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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A "SALUTE," Barbara! Great hearing from you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking time to read our work. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill
Comment from Margaret Bednar
OH, no. I didn't expect Grandpa would get killed - let's hope he's a tough old coot.
and it was gettin' so dark that I couldn't hardly see. (remove "that"?)
Less than ten minutes later, the tornado slammed into the barn taking half of it away, to include 30 bales of hay. (just worded a bit strange at the end... ) (taking half the timbers away, including 30 bales of hay)
cause the log cabin hadn't sustained any damage yet. (remove "yet"?)
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reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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OH, no. I didn't expect Grandpa would get killed - let's hope he's a tough old coot.
and it was gettin' so dark that I couldn't hardly see. (remove "that"?)
Less than ten minutes later, the tornado slammed into the barn taking half of it away, to include 30 bales of hay. (just worded a bit strange at the end... ) (taking half the timbers away, including 30 bales of hay)
cause the log cabin hadn't sustained any damage yet. (remove "yet"?)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2020
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A "SALUTE," Margaret! Great hearing from you, our dear friend. Thanks for the review, kind words, thoughts and taking time to read our work. It is an honor having an "Awesome Writer," (YOU) to express admiration for our work. Best wishes for a great weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.