Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit

Excellent

I think the picture you've chosen is wonderful and really sets this poem up well. Your descriptions and rhymes work well and I like the way the lines flow and roll into each other.

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Thank you, this is a work in progress and I am more a free verser who is attempting to work in a style that for me is most challenging. Your input matters to me, so thank you!

Comment from Puzzle

Excellent

I think you did an ok job. Iambic perimeter and sonnets are not my strong suit. I'm more of a free verse kinda girl. All of these things require an understanding of math....which I do not have lol. Good job!

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 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Puzzle, I am a very strong free verser and I find it so challenging to do metered poet and I am good in math , so take heart :)