Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "THE LAST CHAPTER of Book 4"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
36 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
A fabulous story for ERIC and well written! You are an amazing grandmother!
Writing for children is not that easy and you have to be on their zone. Good for you! Stay safe my friend!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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A fabulous story for ERIC and well written! You are an amazing grandmother!
Writing for children is not that easy and you have to be on their zone. Good for you! Stay safe my friend!
Drew xx
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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What a lovely thing to say, Drew, thank you so very much. I'm delighted you enjoyed this book, you've been so supportive all through and I'm so grateful. Sending you a big hug, my friend. You stay safe and well, too! :)) Sandra xx
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What a great ending to a long adventure! This is a story that will hook young people and keep them coming back for more. You've done a masterful job.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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What a great ending to a long adventure! This is a story that will hook young people and keep them coming back for more. You've done a masterful job.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review, Rebecca, and for all your wonderful support. You've been brilliant! Thank you, and a big hug. :)) Sandra xxx
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I thank you for taking the time to think such a tale, and get it organized, and get right on paper. That was a major undertaking.
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Aw Thank you, Rebecca, that is so nice of you. :) xx
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Aw Thank you, Rebecca, that is so nice of you. :) xx
Comment from Commando
A "SALUTE" # 1 Novelist (yes you, Sandra)! "Into the Fold" is one of --if not the best chapter in your book "Eric's Epic Adventures." In one word, "AWESOME!" From beginning to end, you pull the reader in like a magnet. You are an "INCREDIBLE WRITER!" Toot, Toot! Did you hear that coming? Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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A "SALUTE" # 1 Novelist (yes you, Sandra)! "Into the Fold" is one of --if not the best chapter in your book "Eric's Epic Adventures." In one word, "AWESOME!" From beginning to end, you pull the reader in like a magnet. You are an "INCREDIBLE WRITER!" Toot, Toot! Did you hear that coming? Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Aw, thank you so very much, Bill and Cathy, that is so nice of you to award my book with the six stars and such a wonderful review. I really appreciate you both so much. Thank you!! God Bless you both, my friends. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment from royowen
Well done with this latest fabulous adventure Sandra. You describe these events so well, and like I can remember the adventures of Rupert when I was a mere boy, others will remember Eric and Herbie, and, of course Gizmo, and I can't leave out Drozig, who may be instrumental in protecting our planet in the future. Just a question, would it be possible for a planet with water, just to lose that water, or would the water assume it's component parts? Food for thought Sandra, well done, brilliant post, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Well done with this latest fabulous adventure Sandra. You describe these events so well, and like I can remember the adventures of Rupert when I was a mere boy, others will remember Eric and Herbie, and, of course Gizmo, and I can't leave out Drozig, who may be instrumental in protecting our planet in the future. Just a question, would it be possible for a planet with water, just to lose that water, or would the water assume it's component parts? Food for thought Sandra, well done, brilliant post, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Hello, Roy. Thank you so very much for another lovely review. You've been so wonderful in supporting me as I've been writing for my grandson, and I've really appreciated it. The reason the planet dried out was because it was being pulled closer to the sun and the closer it was getting the more the water was evaporating. Kon knew that his planet would soon be destroyed and they had to find another planet. That was when Atlantis was made, lol. I think when I do the final edit, I'll add that again as a little reminder for the children. Thank you for mentioning that! Stay safe and well, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Well done Sandra,
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great ending chapter, Sandra. I enjoyed reading it. I felt as if I were on the spaceship as the characters zoomed to their new home. I'm thrilled everything worked out for the Aqua-beings/Mermen. You described their new home planet well. Although this book now ends, you could always have part 2 with the way you left that ide open. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes with your publishing.
Respectfully, Jan
Eric watched as the starship was brought out of warp-time and then [ to an abrupt ]stop.
"Thank goodness for that," Eric breathed a soft relieved sigh. Now he knew for sure they were in the right place, and there was a fold there, he couldn't wait to get going. [the word 'there' is used 2 times--[Now he knew for sure they were in the right place; and, the mysterious fold had appeared . . .]
"We need to test it before you go in." Which he did. [Which he did--incomplete sentence--maybe add . . . in. Wait while I test it." ]
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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This is a great ending chapter, Sandra. I enjoyed reading it. I felt as if I were on the spaceship as the characters zoomed to their new home. I'm thrilled everything worked out for the Aqua-beings/Mermen. You described their new home planet well. Although this book now ends, you could always have part 2 with the way you left that ide open. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes with your publishing.
Respectfully, Jan
Eric watched as the starship was brought out of warp-time and then [ to an abrupt ]stop.
"Thank goodness for that," Eric breathed a soft relieved sigh. Now he knew for sure they were in the right place, and there was a fold there, he couldn't wait to get going. [the word 'there' is used 2 times--[Now he knew for sure they were in the right place; and, the mysterious fold had appeared . . .]
"We need to test it before you go in." Which he did. [Which he did--incomplete sentence--maybe add . . . in. Wait while I test it." ]
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Hi Jan, thank you so much for this wonderful review and for spotting those places that needed more added, I made those correction. I've really appreciated all your help during this latest adventure for Eric, thank you, my friend.Sending you a huge hug. Have a lovely week, my friend.:)) Sandra xxxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
What a great adventure! I'm glad they found a new home so much like their old one. I wonder if the aqua beings could learn to communicate from a distance so they could keep in touch with Eric. It's sad that he won't see them again.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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What a great adventure! I'm glad they found a new home so much like their old one. I wonder if the aqua beings could learn to communicate from a distance so they could keep in touch with Eric. It's sad that he won't see them again.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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It is sad, but the one he really doesn't want to lose touch with, is Drozig, because he knows him so well, He spent a lot of time with him on the spaceship and Drozig's planet. They've become great friends now. Who knows, perhaps the Aqua-beings will want to get in touch with Eric in the future. You never know with Eric and his travels. :)) Thank you so very much for all the support you've given me throughout the series, my friend. You've been great! Have a lovely day, and stay safe. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful closing chapter, Sandra. I could feel the excitement and anticipation of everyone, Eric, Drozig, Kon, Herbie, and the entire crew. I liked how you showed Eric as a typical boy,eager to explore and dip his toes in the water and of Drozig reminding him they would have to check everything out first. I can't wait to read about his next adventure. Very well done, be well, be safe, a mental hug and a masked smile. Alie.
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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This was a wonderful closing chapter, Sandra. I could feel the excitement and anticipation of everyone, Eric, Drozig, Kon, Herbie, and the entire crew. I liked how you showed Eric as a typical boy,eager to explore and dip his toes in the water and of Drozig reminding him they would have to check everything out first. I can't wait to read about his next adventure. Very well done, be well, be safe, a mental hug and a masked smile. Alie.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Thank you so very much for another of your lovely reviews, Alie, I'm made-up that you enjoyed this story. Thanks also, for all the encouragement you've given me all the way through. Sending you a hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from damommy
I'm so happy they found their new home, but I'm sorry to leave this wonderful story. It's been quite an adventure. I'd never heard of a fold in space. I think I would have been scared if I had been in Eric's place. What a brave boy!
Looking forward to the next adventure.
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reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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I'm so happy they found their new home, but I'm sorry to leave this wonderful story. It's been quite an adventure. I'd never heard of a fold in space. I think I would have been scared if I had been in Eric's place. What a brave boy!
Looking forward to the next adventure.
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Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Thank you so much for sticking with me all the way through this story, you've been so encouraging and I've really appreciated all your reviews. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Mistydawn
What a sweet ending, a little sad for Eric though, never seeing his new found friends again. I bet it is hard for him, not being able to share his stories. Oh, what an essay he could write about the lost city if he could. It's a very well-written, interesting chapter as always. I do hope this isn't the end of Eric's adventures.
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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What a sweet ending, a little sad for Eric though, never seeing his new found friends again. I bet it is hard for him, not being able to share his stories. Oh, what an essay he could write about the lost city if he could. It's a very well-written, interesting chapter as always. I do hope this isn't the end of Eric's adventures.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the six stars, Misty, and the lovely review. I'm sure Eric will be off again, but I have some editing to do first. Thank you for all your lovely support, my friend. I really have appreciated it. Sending you a hug! :)) Sandra xxx
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I'm so confused. My inbox shows you have something new, but the middle where it says new post is missing. I checked your profile and don't see anything I've missed.
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My last post before this one, was the letter,D for Dinosaur for my ABC book. and before that, chapter 11 of this one. Other than that, I've not got anything else on.
Comment from Ulla
Aw, Sandra, what a lovely and happy ending to his great adventure. I can understand he feels it's all a bit bittersweet to say goodbye because he will surely never see the aqua-beings again. But let's hope we will meet up with Drozig again. I love this series, and I'm sure Eric does, as well. A big hug. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Aw, Sandra, what a lovely and happy ending to his great adventure. I can understand he feels it's all a bit bittersweet to say goodbye because he will surely never see the aqua-beings again. But let's hope we will meet up with Drozig again. I love this series, and I'm sure Eric does, as well. A big hug. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely sixth star, and wonderful review, Ulla, you've put a big smile on my face. I'm sure Eric will go off on his travels again one day. But for the moment, I have lots of editing to do. Thank you for being so supportive throughout this story. I really appreciated it. Lots of hugs, Sandra xxx
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I can imagine that you'll have a lot of work to do. So I will be looking out for your other book you're writing. Hugs back and stay safe. Ulla xxx