Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Drozig's Good News is Questioned"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
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Comment from royowen
So Drozig and the people searching for a planet that compatible with Kon's dead planet, and apparently it was located in a "fold" in space, cleverly hidden anyone's eyes, so it wasn't easy to detect, Eric thought his friend had "lost" it, and it wasn't there, even though he said it was. Well done, and excellent episode, beautifully written Sandra, blessings Roy
Typo : We had a message straight from the searche(r)s
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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So Drozig and the people searching for a planet that compatible with Kon's dead planet, and apparently it was located in a "fold" in space, cleverly hidden anyone's eyes, so it wasn't easy to detect, Eric thought his friend had "lost" it, and it wasn't there, even though he said it was. Well done, and excellent episode, beautifully written Sandra, blessings Roy
Typo : We had a message straight from the searche(r)s
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for another lovely review, Roy, and for spotting the missing 'r', it's words like that which aren't picked up on spellcheck. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying this story. Have a wonderful day, my friend, and stay safe. :)) Sandra xxx
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Welcome Sandra,
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sandra. Another chapter filled with imagination and creative thinking. I liked the discussion about the "differences" in water and how that could effect the choice of which planet the Atlanteans could occupy.
"One voice at a time in his head was all he could manage," is quite an interesting statement.
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Hello Sandra. Another chapter filled with imagination and creative thinking. I liked the discussion about the "differences" in water and how that could effect the choice of which planet the Atlanteans could occupy.
"One voice at a time in his head was all he could manage," is quite an interesting statement.
Robert
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Hello Robert, thank you for another lovely review. I'm glad you liked the water part, there was so much I could have written about that but thought it best to keep it simple so readers didn't get bored. It's nice that you picked up on it, though. Thank you. Have a lovely day, my friend. Sandra xx
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you're welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an exciting chapter, Sandra. I enjoyed reading it. I was right there on the ship as all travelled through space. You did a great job with the responses to what was happening from each character. I liked Eric's history lessons. The discovery of the suitable planet makes me think of parallel universes. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
and happily sang and showed his ( them) how good he was at dancing.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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This is an exciting chapter, Sandra. I enjoyed reading it. I was right there on the ship as all travelled through space. You did a great job with the responses to what was happening from each character. I liked Eric's history lessons. The discovery of the suitable planet makes me think of parallel universes. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
and happily sang and showed his ( them) how good he was at dancing.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for picking up that nit, Jan, I really appreciate you telling me. And, thank you so much for the lovely review! Have a lovely day, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from Mistydawn
It'd be great if this mystery planet was the answer to all their problems. I imagine Eric probably does think his friend lost his marbles not seeing anything there, lol. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting start to finish. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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It'd be great if this mystery planet was the answer to all their problems. I imagine Eric probably does think his friend lost his marbles not seeing anything there, lol. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting start to finish. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Misty, I really appreciate your reading this part. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Drew Delaney
I didn't notice any SPAG's. You have done a marvellous job and the story is going along real well. I'm am quite certain, this would be very appealing to the young generation into space and aliens. Nice work! A regular author you have become!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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I didn't notice any SPAG's. You have done a marvellous job and the story is going along real well. I'm am quite certain, this would be very appealing to the young generation into space and aliens. Nice work! A regular author you have become!
Drew xx
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for those six stars, Drew! You really have made my day. I'm so pleased you liked this part, and that you think the younger readers will enjoy it. That is so encouraging, my friend! Thank you! Stay well and safe! Sandra xxxx
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, you know that I love this story. I wonder what it is that Drozig can see, which the rest of them obviously can't. You leave us on a cliff hanger and it is unfair. Please do hurry up with the next part. A big hug. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Hi Sandra, you know that I love this story. I wonder what it is that Drozig can see, which the rest of them obviously can't. You leave us on a cliff hanger and it is unfair. Please do hurry up with the next part. A big hug. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the six stars, Ulla! You must have been reading mine at the same time I was reading yours! lol. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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I know, we have been reading at the same time!!! How's that for timing? xx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
That's good news. They have found the perfect planet for the Aqua people to live on. It was found in a black empty void that you can't see. Kon wants to see it before he tells his people. Hope it works for them. Well done Sandra. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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That's good news. They have found the perfect planet for the Aqua people to live on. It was found in a black empty void that you can't see. Kon wants to see it before he tells his people. Hope it works for them. Well done Sandra. Nancy:)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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They might have found a lot more than that! Thank you so very much for another lovely review, Nancy. Stay safe, my friend. Have a lovely week. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Yeah, that's kinda cool: "we live just inside the 'fold' right here".... :) ;) Eric's an old pro at space travel it seems! ;) A great chapter, Sandra, and I can't wait to go sight-seeing inside the fold! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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LOL! Yeah, that's kinda cool: "we live just inside the 'fold' right here".... :) ;) Eric's an old pro at space travel it seems! ;) A great chapter, Sandra, and I can't wait to go sight-seeing inside the fold! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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The fold has a lot more to it than they know at the moment, so stay tuned. Lol. Thank you so much, Yvette, for reading and the lovely comments. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
Another great episode. I particularly like the added depth you are giving to the character of Kon by showing his slight scepticism. That is good as it makes him seem more real, as well as being a good leader of his people.
'Drozig left the bridge in the safe hands of his Number One.' Do you think your readers will be aware of what is meant by 'his Number One'? A single clause addition such as 'his second in command' would be sufficient to explain this Naval expression.
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Another great episode. I particularly like the added depth you are giving to the character of Kon by showing his slight scepticism. That is good as it makes him seem more real, as well as being a good leader of his people.
'Drozig left the bridge in the safe hands of his Number One.' Do you think your readers will be aware of what is meant by 'his Number One'? A single clause addition such as 'his second in command' would be sufficient to explain this Naval expression.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely review, Jim, and more for the suggestion. I'll change that now. I'm so glad you liked the part with Kon, that's so encouraging. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Sandra, hurray! They have found a place to live for the aqua people. Very good news. I liked your explanations about the different types of water. Also the possibility of other galaxies behind the black holes. And all that instructions are woven in the fascinating adventures of your grandson's Eric. As always: so good!
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Sandra, hurray! They have found a place to live for the aqua people. Very good news. I liked your explanations about the different types of water. Also the possibility of other galaxies behind the black holes. And all that instructions are woven in the fascinating adventures of your grandson's Eric. As always: so good!
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Marjon. Yes they have to go and find what Drozig's searches have discovered. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
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And as always: so welcome
