Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

I wonder what that news from the home planet is. I hope it's good news. You did a great job describing Eric's feelings and emotions to the entire situation. I am sure that's exactly how a young boy would feel.

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020

Thank you so much for the 6 stars, Barb! Having 2 brothers, and 2 sons, and now Eric, has given me a lot to work with, lol. Thank you for those encouraging words, my friend. Have a lovely day! :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

I'm not really into this type of stories but I was intrigued to learn something new but yet old. My thoughts went back to Flash Gordon, Buck Rodgers, days in space ships going to the moon and the excitement comic books gave us kids. Today that all is real. Who knows what this story could bring. For sure your grandson knows in his own way. Well done Sandy.

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020

Thank you so much, Chuck, for those 6 stars! These stories, staring my grandson (in the picture above.) are only short stories that would go well in a comic book. This is the 4th adventure and I'm going to see if a boy's comic publisher would be interested. Who knows? Thank you, my dear friend. Have a lovely day, and take care! :)) Sandra xxx

I went into Amazon to look for your book, but couldn't find it. What name have you published it under? I tried Ben Colder. And what is the title, is it the same as it was on here? xxx

reply by Ben Colder on 18-Apr-2020

Silent Hand Of God is my last published. Charles Dale is another name I have used but Ben Colder is the last. Thanks Sandy.

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020

I have the Silent Hand Of God. Now I want your next book. The one I wasn't able to read as you put it on FS. Let me know when that comes out, will you? I hope you are staying safe and well, my friend. xxx

reply by Ben Colder on 18-Apr-2020

I will see you get a copy if the Lord's will. Appreciate you Sandy.

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020

Thank you, Chuck, I can't wait to read it. :)) xx

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I'm sure it won't take Dorzig (in your second last paragraph you've left out the 'i.') long to find a new planet for them. Somewhere in the universe there must be an uninhabited planet with plenty of water. It promises to be an exciting adventure for Eric.

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020

Thank you so much, Cindy, for your reading this part and your nice comments. I'll take a look for that error, thanks for letting me know, I really appreciate it. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Another wonderful chapter, Sandra. Your imagination is wonderful and seems to know no bounds. I love it. Now I cannot wait to see what is happening next. So what news have come through? It sounds a bit ominous. Ulla xxx

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

The news came in just as I was ending this part, so I really don't know what's happened! I'm sure I'll find out soon, LOL. You are so kind, Ulla, another six, what can I say? THANK YOU SO MUCH! You're really put a big smile on my face. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A brilliant episode Sandra, with your fantastic imagination working overtime, although the thing should be easy for you now, but I notice that the challenges probably never cease for you now. I like the way you've rearranged history and given a new perspective and rumour may become fact. And you'll be even more famous my friend, blessing Roy

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

What a wonderful review, Roy! Thank you so very much. LOL, I love the thought of my changing history and making rumour become fact. Of course it's fact! You don't really believe I could make this up, do you?? :)) lol. You've made my day, my friend, thank you so much, I love your review. Big hugs, and enjoy the rest of the Easter break. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by royowen on 12-Apr-2020

Well done Sandra

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

An excellent chapter for your book, Sandra! Nicely written. I did not notice any SPAG issues either.
I hope you have a lovely Easter. We are still cold here and it is not nice at all. I hope it will get warmer soon. The ticks are already out though!
Happy Easter!
Drew xx

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

I hate to brag, but we've been having some really warm weather, the best Easter weather for years, and the children can't go out to play!! Isn't that just the way it goes? Thank you for your lovely review, my friend, I'll keep my fingers crossed that you get some warm weather soon. Hope you can enjoy the rest of the Easter Holiday, Take care and stay well, :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Sandra,

Nope, not a single nit did I see -- and I looked rreeeaaaallly hard, too. hahaha This was a great chapter, one I think your grandson will love. Imagining all those G-forces! I think it's much better to 'face' them in a book, however. Safer, too. hahaha

Thanks! I enjoyed!

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

Thank you so much, Robyn, for this wonderful review. I had a mental picture of you going over the chapter with a magnifying glass!! LOL! Thanks for trying, lol. I'll be off to bed in a minute giggling my head off. Happy Easter, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I hope the news isn't bad or at least they have enough time to get everyone off the planet. Your story is very well-written, interesting start to finish as always. I look forward to reading more. I started to say every kid would love to have a replicator in their home, but you know what? I wouldn't mind having one myself especially if it's stocked with candy. No more late snack attacks with nothing sweet in the house to eat.

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

I would love a replicator in my house, lol. Chocolates galore!! Thank you so much, Misty, for the six stars, and the fabulous review. I really appreciate everything you said. If I get the patent on a replicator, I make sure you get one! Happy Easter, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

And now we know why we have seen Mermaids and Mermen... apparently someone... or someones... were left behind. Was it on purpose? Did we become their prison colony? Who can tell?

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 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

The only ones that didn't come where the ones who wanted to stay, so don't worry, Susan, they'll be fine. Thank you so much, my friend, for this lovely review, Happy Easter! :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

Awesome, as the youngsters say. You put Eric right in the story for real. 8-)

When people talk about being teletransported (if that's the right word), I agree with Eric. I'm afraid of being all jumbled up in a horrible way. I think I'll just travel the old-fashioned way. lol.

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020

Aw, thank you so much, Yvonne. I used to watch Star Trek, with James Kirk, and when they beamed up, I wondered if how they could get back the same way they left. More so when they beamed up several people at once!! lol. Thank you for the lovely six stars, and this fabulous review, my friend. Have a lovely Easter, and stay safe and well. :)) Sandra xxx