Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Eric Has More Surprises!"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, you lovely bouquet of flowers...was kind of wondering why they wanted to take them in the water...glad it wasn't bad...wouldn't want Eric's bike to get wet...to say the least...sounds like they are at Sea World...large fishtails...can't wait to hear what else they find in Atlantis...and at least they can communicate with each other...another great chapter my wonderful sweet friend...
and I love this picture...I don't think any one is missing from the sea world...LOL...very well written you...I love your story told soooooooo much....bunches of love to you...and tons of hugs...Linda xxoo
I am in Florida now...stayed at Kristy's Friday night...and went by mom one Sunday...I walked in Kristy's and grabbed Noah...and said...here's a thousand hugs and kisses from Sandra...and your book will be out soon...and I gave him and Abby a thousand hugs and kisses from me...and Kristy and Nadel...I told them I would be back when mom got better...I saw mom today with my brother...she's not happy to be in rehab...but knows it won't be to much longer...the place is just beautiful...Christian run...so tomorrow I'll go back up and stay with her for awhile...Wednesday they are going to try and get her to stand...but I have to take her to get an MRI next week as well...the place will drive us...and bring us back...so she will have a busy week...well...I'm going to bed...sweet dreams you...love xxoo
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Hi Sandra, you lovely bouquet of flowers...was kind of wondering why they wanted to take them in the water...glad it wasn't bad...wouldn't want Eric's bike to get wet...to say the least...sounds like they are at Sea World...large fishtails...can't wait to hear what else they find in Atlantis...and at least they can communicate with each other...another great chapter my wonderful sweet friend...
and I love this picture...I don't think any one is missing from the sea world...LOL...very well written you...I love your story told soooooooo much....bunches of love to you...and tons of hugs...Linda xxoo
I am in Florida now...stayed at Kristy's Friday night...and went by mom one Sunday...I walked in Kristy's and grabbed Noah...and said...here's a thousand hugs and kisses from Sandra...and your book will be out soon...and I gave him and Abby a thousand hugs and kisses from me...and Kristy and Nadel...I told them I would be back when mom got better...I saw mom today with my brother...she's not happy to be in rehab...but knows it won't be to much longer...the place is just beautiful...Christian run...so tomorrow I'll go back up and stay with her for awhile...Wednesday they are going to try and get her to stand...but I have to take her to get an MRI next week as well...the place will drive us...and bring us back...so she will have a busy week...well...I'm going to bed...sweet dreams you...love xxoo
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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You say the loveliest of thing, my wonderful friend. :)) Thank you for the 6 stars, and this fabulous review. I keep forgetting Abby! How old is she? I don't want her to feel left out. :(
I've had the editing done, now I'm waiting for some of the pictures and the book cover to be sent over. The Internet server my illustration friend uses has been down for a week. Really annoying. But once I have them, I can get on and publish the book.
I'm so pleased you're able to be with your mom, she needs to know you're all with her. I wish my mum was still with me, there is so many things I'd like to say to her, and give her more hugs. Take as much time as you can, my friend, once they are in God's care, we won't have the chance any more.
Love you loads, my sweet friend. I'll let you know when the book is published. I'll send them to you when they're done. Biggest hugs and load of love to you all. xxxxxxxx Sandra xxxxxxxxxxx
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I just left her...she was falling asleep...but I was able to stay about three hours...my brother is putting railings all over the house...so it will be safer for her when she gets here...I know I will be here for awhile...Jim has to get some time in at work...he has his own roofing company...and 6 houses waiting for him...he's a great guy...
Abby is doing fine...she is 14...and drives ya crazy...
and you my amazing friend are so welcome...alwaysssssss...soooooo much love flying over to you...Linda xxoo
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Your brother sounds like a lovely, caring man. Your parents did a wonderful job raising you both. I think Abby is a normal, carefree teenager, doing what teenagers do. LOL, That's their job!. I'll keep you all in my prayers, my dear friend. Sending you all loads of love. You take care, too. Don't overstrain those eyes now. xxxxx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
A very interesting chapter, Sandra, as we learn more about the Aqua-beings. The encounter with them is well-expressed. I like how you described Eric's thoughts and those of the aqua-beings. The communication between the tow groups was well-thought out. This could have been disastrous; but, it seems they are as interested in Eric as he is in them. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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A very interesting chapter, Sandra, as we learn more about the Aqua-beings. The encounter with them is well-expressed. I like how you described Eric's thoughts and those of the aqua-beings. The communication between the tow groups was well-thought out. This could have been disastrous; but, it seems they are as interested in Eric as he is in them. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Jan. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying the story. There are more surprises in store for Eric and a lot for the Aqua-beings. Big hugs, my friend, :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Marietta Standlee
Very interesting concept and nicely written storyline. And thanks for the fathom, I liked that tidbit. Please keep them coming. I am new here, so please excuse me, if my review isn't the greatest. :)
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Very interesting concept and nicely written storyline. And thanks for the fathom, I liked that tidbit. Please keep them coming. I am new here, so please excuse me, if my review isn't the greatest. :)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Mariette, for coming along on this adventure. We have a little while to go yet, so I hope so see you again. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Comment from Cindy Warren
Some of them are mermaids? Of course they'd be curious about a species that can live only out of water. They all seem friendly enough, but are they? I wonder if they have something else in mind for Eric and company.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Some of them are mermaids? Of course they'd be curious about a species that can live only out of water. They all seem friendly enough, but are they? I wonder if they have something else in mind for Eric and company.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Hmm, that I'm not sure of, I'll have to have a word with one of them! lol. Thank you, Cindy, for another of your lovely reviews. I do so appreciate them. Big hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from patcelaw
This is an interesting and informative read, I did not know where the fathom term came from. May your week be blessed with good things.
Patricia
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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This is an interesting and informative read, I did not know where the fathom term came from. May your week be blessed with good things.
Patricia
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Patricia. I'm really glad you enjoyed this part. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from JudyE
Have we got some merpeople coming along now? lol This is getting better and better. And try as I might, the only correction I could come up with is:
and would like to learn what we can from you.' - did you mean 'and we would like...'
Enjoy your day
Judy
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Have we got some merpeople coming along now? lol This is getting better and better. And try as I might, the only correction I could come up with is:
and would like to learn what we can from you.' - did you mean 'and we would like...'
Enjoy your day
Judy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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My word, Judy! Only one little nit! I have to go and lie down in a darkened room! LOL. Thank you so very much, my friend, you've made my day. and a huge hug for the 6 stars! :))) Sandra xxx
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Sandra, only because I am getting short of my six stars, I have to give you five for this chapter, but it is just as good and exciting to read as the others were.
I am so happy to see these chapters appear and I read Eric's adventures with pleasure. And that is because they are so skillfully written, so perfectly build up. I am a bit jealous and realize I still have to learn a lot. Book-writing is definitely a different thing.
So well done, again!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Sandra, only because I am getting short of my six stars, I have to give you five for this chapter, but it is just as good and exciting to read as the others were.
I am so happy to see these chapters appear and I read Eric's adventures with pleasure. And that is because they are so skillfully written, so perfectly build up. I am a bit jealous and realize I still have to learn a lot. Book-writing is definitely a different thing.
So well done, again!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for this really lovely review, Marjon, it's a six star just with your words. I appreciate all you've said, and hope you'll continue to come along on this adventure. Sending you a hug, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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Yes! I can't stay away from Eric now.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Very clever, Sandra. Vivid in detail with many touches of humor. How nice that the creatures will respect Eric's ability to handle only one conversation at a time. How many teachers and parents would love to have their clamoring kids so comply. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Very clever, Sandra. Vivid in detail with many touches of humor. How nice that the creatures will respect Eric's ability to handle only one conversation at a time. How many teachers and parents would love to have their clamoring kids so comply. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I'm sure most teachers would, lol, and parents. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this part, Elizabeth, I really appreciated them. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
Ah, now we have some mermen and possibly maids as well. The story is really hotting up now, you have an amazing imagination, and you have to use it more and more as you progress. I like the idea of telepathic communication, it is by far the most efficient form of communication. But could embarrass sometimes, I'm not sure I'd like people in my mind. Well done Sandra, you're a genius, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Ah, now we have some mermen and possibly maids as well. The story is really hotting up now, you have an amazing imagination, and you have to use it more and more as you progress. I like the idea of telepathic communication, it is by far the most efficient form of communication. But could embarrass sometimes, I'm not sure I'd like people in my mind. Well done Sandra, you're a genius, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I'm with you on not wanting people getting into my head, Roy, as you say, it could be embarrassing, LOL. Thank you for another wonderful review, my dear friend. Sending you lots of love and a big hug. :)) Sandra xx
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Bless you more
Comment from aryr
A very exciting and educational chapter, Sandra. Definitely Eric is learning as well, the various issues presented are new and unique. It was interesting that you used the comparisons of all of the Atlanteans trying to talk at once and Eric's ability to deal with this and to his ability to deal with the noisy schoolyard. I am sure this is an adventure that he will not forget. Very well done, hugs and smiles, Alie.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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A very exciting and educational chapter, Sandra. Definitely Eric is learning as well, the various issues presented are new and unique. It was interesting that you used the comparisons of all of the Atlanteans trying to talk at once and Eric's ability to deal with this and to his ability to deal with the noisy schoolyard. I am sure this is an adventure that he will not forget. Very well done, hugs and smiles, Alie.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Alie, for all these lovely comments! I'm delighted you are still enjoying this story. A big hug to you, my friend. :)) Sandra xx