When Love Was Taken
An Acrostic- Loop Poem26 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
An acrostic loop poem that is logical and maintains a theme throughout--quite an accomplishment! This lovely poem conveys a powerful message about how we CAN rise from the pit that loss of love plunges un into.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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An acrostic loop poem that is logical and maintains a theme throughout--quite an accomplishment! This lovely poem conveys a powerful message about how we CAN rise from the pit that loss of love plunges un into.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for your understanding review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Helena Frances
Such a great flow of thoughts! The loop is so effective in the ebb and flow of the journey, as I see it, from loss to hope.
The artwork is beautiful and fits your verse perfectly. Grief has made me feel untethered in the past, but eventually I found my footing again:)
Peace,
Helena
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Such a great flow of thoughts! The loop is so effective in the ebb and flow of the journey, as I see it, from loss to hope.
The artwork is beautiful and fits your verse perfectly. Grief has made me feel untethered in the past, but eventually I found my footing again:)
Peace,
Helena
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much Helena, grief is hard to shake but we must, your review and comments, and stars are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I don't have a six but the combination of actostic and loop is absolutely unique and completely spot on. You kept the content moving easily like a story line
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I don't have a six but the combination of actostic and loop is absolutely unique and completely spot on. You kept the content moving easily like a story line
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful and encouraging review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a
perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start , your word I have experience to many times in my life.
This is a deep and emotional poem. Have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a
perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start , your word I have experience to many times in my life.
This is a deep and emotional poem. Have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review, very much appreciated****kahpot
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Your very welcome.
Cookie
Comment from June Sargent
I wish I had a six to give you for this creative piece that not only combines two poetic forms seamlessly, but also paints a poignant portrait of love and loss. Well done!
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I wish I had a six to give you for this creative piece that not only combines two poetic forms seamlessly, but also paints a poignant portrait of love and loss. Well done!
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review, it was a journey, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much sadness in these words and to write an acrostic and loop together is quite a challenge and yours seemed smooth and legible and much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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There is much sadness in these words and to write an acrostic and loop together is quite a challenge and yours seemed smooth and legible and much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful and understanding review and comments, as always much appreciated****kahpot