Comment from
Mackenzie Schmidt
I enjoyed Your poem Terror of The Mind. Your use of repetition within the poem was really effective . Your poem seems to fit the qualifications of the kyrielle. I liked the picture you used. I liked that you choose the horror genre.
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
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Comment from
Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Write a Kyrielle writing prompt.
This well rhymed verse tells of the cries of birds and the grey sky.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
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