Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Crazy Over You! - Chapter 14"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from Nowhereman1
Thank you for another interesting chapter in this well written book. I like the characters you have created and the book has been a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for another interesting chapter in this well written book. I like the characters you have created and the book has been a very interesting read.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Hi Nowhereman! So glad you are enjoying the book and characters. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, thank you for your continued support. Chapter 15 is in the works and coming soon. Have a wonderful weekend. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sally Law
Of course she is pregnant! (It made my hormones go nuts.) I remember my husband looking at me in wonderment.
My, this was an emotional tanker, and so glad all is well after the stay in the asylum. It served a purpose though, to be there and offer prayers, admist those who truly suffered severe mental illness. A good word picture for real life. I'm still amongst the needy, those who need my love and prayers.
A fine offering and continuing chapter. I loved the Patsy Cline song, Crazy. Still do. Thanks for including that with your great story.
Sending you both my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Of course she is pregnant! (It made my hormones go nuts.) I remember my husband looking at me in wonderment.
My, this was an emotional tanker, and so glad all is well after the stay in the asylum. It served a purpose though, to be there and offer prayers, admist those who truly suffered severe mental illness. A good word picture for real life. I'm still amongst the needy, those who need my love and prayers.
A fine offering and continuing chapter. I loved the Patsy Cline song, Crazy. Still do. Thanks for including that with your great story.
Sending you both my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Our best to you, as well, Sally! We really appreciate your continued support and thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. Your comments are heartfelt. God Bless You! Chapter 15 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you the best today and always.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I love your story. Are parts of your story non fictional? Most of the story is pronouncing your love for each other. So are you together in the real world? No matter what, I love your story.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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I love your story. Are parts of your story non fictional? Most of the story is pronouncing your love for each other. So are you together in the real world? No matter what, I love your story.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Hi Rosemary! Guess what? We're going to "leave you in a state of uncertainty" as to what is fiction and what is not. Ahhh...such a mystery! Look on this (Cathy's) profile page and, if you haven't already, listen to the podcast posted earlier about co-authoring. It will share more about how we met and our relationship. However, we still keep everyone guessing whether we are co-authors only, or...more! :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your continued support. We're so glad you are loving our story! Chapter 15 is already in the works and coming soon. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is well penned with no evidence of SPAG. This bounced back and forth a bit too much for my taste, I think it might have been a better flow had the middle short spurts been consolidated by character rather than the short back and forth tempo. I've been expecting the pregnancy and see that the thought has now been officially introduced into the story. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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This is well penned with no evidence of SPAG. This bounced back and forth a bit too much for my taste, I think it might have been a better flow had the middle short spurts been consolidated by character rather than the short back and forth tempo. I've been expecting the pregnancy and see that the thought has now been officially introduced into the story. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Greetings, Mystic Angel! Your continued support is greatly appreciated! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. You have helped us with your comments, and that means so much! If you read this again, you will see that we have made some changes. A second thank you to you, along with a "SALUTE!" We're now working on Chapter 15. Stay tuned--it will be coming soon! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello again to the dynamic duo. Still enjoying your spiritual romance. Your work never disappoints. You can never go wrong with great story telling coupled with good characters and dialogue, it's a recipe for success every time. I enjoyed as always.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Hello again to the dynamic duo. Still enjoying your spiritual romance. Your work never disappoints. You can never go wrong with great story telling coupled with good characters and dialogue, it's a recipe for success every time. I enjoyed as always.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Hello again from both of us! We really appreciate your continued support and want to thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. Great comments! We're so glad you like our characters and you are enjoying Love Long Distance. Chapter 15 is already in the works and coming soon. God Bless!
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
"The Dynamic Duo" :)
Comment from JLR
You both have co created a real page turner. Anyone of us can relate to some place in time in our past when a family member, neighbor, friend went off the deep end. Valium, was at the time the great fix all, so many zombies resulted.
Continued success with this soon to be published work.
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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You both have co created a real page turner. Anyone of us can relate to some place in time in our past when a family member, neighbor, friend went off the deep end. Valium, was at the time the great fix all, so many zombies resulted.
Continued success with this soon to be published work.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Hi JLR! So very true what you share here about mental illness. Thank you! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing Chapter 14 of Love Long Distance. Your support is very important to us, and we thank you for that, too, and "SALUTE" you! So glad you find this novel a "real page turner." HURRAH! Be sure to stay tuned. Since we plan on publishing this book by the end of the year, we are already working on the next chapter. Coming soon! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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This chapter was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Doctor Ricky, for reading and reviewing Chapter 14 of Love Long Distance. We really appreciate your comments here, along with your continued support. Bless you! Chapter 15 is already in the works and coming soon.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill and Cathy
