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Love Letter on a Clipboard #2

The love letters continue.

34 total reviews 
Comment from Sylvia Page
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A beautiful love note. So now he sends you a poem as well as special almond covered chocolates and a gift card to buy a special dress for a date. Moving up is he?
All the best for the dinner date.
Sylvia

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, dear Sylvia. Your reviews and kind comments mean so much to me. I?m so glad you?re enjoying this. Sending my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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This little books of yours is coming out nicely and is bringing up a forgotten tradition of hand written letters. Miss Spencer is lucky that her secret Admirer is not having my hand writing:) it will be a disaster and will require to hire a specialist in scribbling:) Thank you for sharing and waiting for the next snippet:)

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Iza. I appreciate the excellent review and kind comments. It is always so good to see your name and read your reviews. Sending you my best today as well, Sally xo
reply by Iza Deleanu on 09-Oct-2019
    Is my duty to say that I enjoyed your chapter:) One more time thank you for sharing and have a blessed day,
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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If I were Kristin, I'd move and not leave a forwarding address. This man is potentially dangerous, maybe a stalker. How can he love someone he hardly knows? He's clearly a nutcase, but he does write a good love letter. Run, Kristin, run!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    I hope to win you over, my resident love Cynic. I have hope for you, too. I?m threatening to write another one similar to this. A woman named ?Philippa? who has sworn off love, and then finds it again. :]
    Sending you my best today as always, my friend,
    Sally xo
Comment from Sankey
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Loved this so sweet. Glad there were some sixes to give it as well. Was not sure about the double "Eve" on Christmas, will leave that to you to decide. Loved the artwork and the poem.

Christmas [Eve] Eve?

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
    Thank you for the superb review and generous six stars, once again. It must be an American thing, but see the Urban Dictionary regarding ?Christmas Eve Eve.? Naturally, it is the evening before Christmas Eve. I?m so pleased you are both enjoying my love story.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :]
    For you xo
    For Louise xo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Sally. This secret admirer has "got it bad" for Kristin. If this were a Texas Hold 'em poker game he is what I would call "all in." I also really like e e cummings. He was an unconventional poet and didn't write by the rules everyone else used. This is an excellent story. I am looking forward to #3. Z

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    That is a great description of my story Texas Hold ?em poker game. Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. Not much gets by you so I?m going to need to hold ?em. Thanks for staying with me. Sending you my best as always, Sally :]
Comment from fm wright
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Love how he answers her, how he has explained himself and remembered her particular likes. Anyway, I truly love the unfolding story and the chosen artwork.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for the awesome review and generous six star rating. It is a delight to write these love stories for fans and readers like you. So glad you like. :]
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xoxo
Comment from Teri7
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This is very sweet and romantic what you have penned. You used very good and very sweet words. The art work you chose went well with your words. I have to look for the first one too. Haven't reviewed that yet. love and blessings my friend. Teri

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments. It is always so appreciated. I?m so glad you?re turning into my story. Sending my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Debbie Pope
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This story is so you, Sally. It's so upbeat, quirky, and romantic. Romantic above all else. I know that when I read your posts, I will feel better. Well, that's not totally true. Often, you make me feel sad that I don't have your spirit and love of life. That's on me though. Don't you change a thing.
Glad that I read this love letter.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    This is quite possibly the sweetest comment someone has ever paid me. (Except for my husband, of course.) I?m so glad you love my sweet love story and that you enjoy and are encouraged by my writing. That means the most.
    Sending you my best today as always, my dear Debbie.
    Sally XO
reply by Debbie Pope on 08-Oct-2019
    I meant every word.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    I know you did. You are so honest and sincere. Two of the many things I love about you Debbie Pope.
Comment from Patty Palmer
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A very romantic love letter! I want to know what Ms. Spencer answered. Did you get to take her out to dinner? Did you sweep her off her feet?
Good luck!!
Patty

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, dear Patty. I appreciate your excellent review and kind comments. It is always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as well, Sally xo
Comment from Alex Rosel
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I do like this. The letter reads exactly how I would expect someone mesmerized by Kristin would write it. I'm looking forward to reading further your subsequent posts to see where this goes {smiles}.

There's just one very picky point:
a possibility I knew existed, but until now--never entertained. -- If this was mine, I wouldn't use an em dash after "until now". I'd replace it with a comma.

Wishing you a great week ahead,
Alex.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind critique, dear Alex. It is always appreciated.
    Sending my best today as well,
    Sally :]